NOW AND ZEN
INSPIRED BY LOVE AND FRUSTRATION AND THE SEARCH FOR MEANING…...
NOW AND ZEN belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], EMI - The Group, Melbourne & Victoria, THE DIVINE FEMININE and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!I AM THE CONQUISTADOR DANCING
ON THE MOON BEAMS OF THE LOVE
THAT RADIATES FROM YOUR HEART.
I AM THE MIDNIGHT NINJA
WHO STEALS INTO THE SECRETS OF YOUR SOUL,
LEAVING SWEET SURPRISES.
I AM THE MYSTIC BEAST WHO
FILLS YOUR DREAMS WITH FIRE AND LUST
AND THE TASTE OF FORBIDDEN PLEASURES.
I AM THE GESTALT OF ALL
YOUR FRUSTRATIONS AND AMBITIONS.
PAST, PRESENT AND FUTURE.
I AM LIKE AND YET UNLIKE ALL MEN.
BUT MORE THAN THIS, I AM ZEN!
AT LEAST…......EVERY NOW AND….........
chugginrail
wonderful write…its always interesting to search within us for the answers!! sometimes frustrating indeed
raymondoantonio replied
THANX CHUGGINRAIL!! FROM FRUSTRATION, INSIGHTS ARE BORN!
happyfeet5
Oh my. You are surely everything here from what is the same to what are the opposites and the yin yang just trying to find real self and yes, this will be frustrating. But while this is all true, you write it with such passion and you dance and are a conquistador that at the same time it seems you are romancing your love. Ahhhhh. I guess it is the romantic in you that does this. Iris
raymondoantonio replied
YES, WE ARE ALL COMPLEX CREATURES SEARCHING FOR TRUTH AND LOVE!! THANX IRIS XO
banrai
another fine write, Ray
raymondoantonio replied
THANX BANRAI!!
kevinmawson
Wonderful writing Raymondoantonio! I really enjoyed reading this!
km.
raymondoantonio replied
THANX KEVIN!!!!!
Varry
OHHHH I like this Ray…bravo! lol ;-D x
raymondoantonio replied
THANX VARRY!!! XO =D!
Patricia Anne ...
OOOOO Very COOL! can I post this one with chapter 16? :)
raymondoantonio replied
AN OHHHHH AND AN OOOOOO!! THANX PATRICIA!! AND YES, POST IT WITH CHAPTER 16!! XO
Patricia Anne ...
DONE heehee looks cool
raymondoantonio replied
JUST CHECKED IT OUT!! THANX!! XOXO
Patricia Anne ...
xoxo
AngielArtsagain
:)
raymondoantonio replied
=D=D!!
ÒjÓ_ Magico
another wonderful piece
raymondoantonio replied
THANX OJO!!
Beth Wilson
Personally I think this genre of poetry is your best Ray. They ooooooooze sensuality and passion. :-)
raymondoantonio replied
THANX BETH!! I LOOOOOOOOVE YOUR COM!! XO
Normaje
This is wonderful, I love the write, more please, With all my love…......
raymondoantonio replied
THANX NORMAJE!! XO
cosimopiro
AGAIN. Oh man, love this!! Brilliant friend! It is so alive.
raymondoantonio replied
THANX COSIMO!! PASSION!! YES!!
valentina63
This is magnificent raymondo….its hard to pick but probably one of my favorites of yours .Love it!!!xxoo ….and plan to read it may times
raymondoantonio replied
THANX VALENTINA!! ENJOY!! XO
francis carter
very nice mate very touching!!
raymondoantonio replied
THANX FRANCIS!
Matt Penfold
Jeez Ray, you really get around mate, you mystic beast you… nice writing :-)
raymondoantonio replied
THANX MATT!! I LOVE BEING MYSTERIOUS!!!
Christie Moses
Omg I LUV this Raymondo…its fantabuloustastic!! :) xoxo
raymondoantonio replied
YOU MUST SERIOUSLY PUT OUT A DICTIONARY OF AMAZING WORDS!! THANX CHRISTIE!!! XO
JaneSolomon
From one fireball to another. I like. xx
raymondoantonio replied
THANX JANE!! KEEP ON BURNING!!! XO
rubyjo
ahhh- love this raymondo- and love how you leave us hanging to fill in the last word.. :)
you da man!
raymondoantonio replied
THANX RUBYJO!! ALWAYS LEAVE EM HANGIN’ OUT FOR MORE!!! YEEEHAAAAAAA!!! XO
Shulie1
This is wonderful – you have a dancing soul
raymondoantonio replied
THANX SHULIE!! I LOVE DANCING!! XO
Delphine de Noire
MMM… Absolutely Riveted Raymondo… ;-)
Last line had me Roaring with laughter!
Exquisite!
Mx
raymondoantonio replied
THANX MEDUSA!!! IF I CAN BRING A LITTLE LAUGHTER INTO THE WORLD, THEN…...........XO
RosaCobos
You are….
your are..
THE DEVIL!!!!!
Out of good-bad polarity.
Out of bad conscience about being “bad”.
Not meaning the moment of creativity,
where we cross the door,
that is simply like a wheel of fire.
Rosa (great, Ray)
raymondoantonio replied
NO! I’M LUCIFER!! MWAH!!! XO
frogster
You da man
raymondoantonio replied
THANX FROGSTER!!!! I TRY!
TheWanderingBoo
wonderful piece of writing
raymondoantonio replied
THANX TWB!!!
GuyAmazed
very nice—and clever
raymondoantonio replied
THANX GA!!!
Jane17
Very good.. I like the bold self-assertiveness of this poem, it’s strong like a dart hitting it’s bullseye, the heart. clever ending bringing you off the page..
raymondoantonio replied
THANX JANE!! SOMETIMES I LIKE TO LEAVE THE END TO THE READERS IMAGINATION! XO
Isa Rodriguez
i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, kisses and hugs you wonderful raymundo .. i am secretly in love with u.. ssssssshhhhhhhhhh
raymondoantonio replied
THANX ISA!!! SSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHH I PROMISE NOT TO TELL ANY ONE BELLA DONNA!! XO
Jo Hoden "C'...
fab work …....
raymondoantonio replied
THANX JO!
Trenchtownrock
This is really great Ray…the ending of this piece really rocks hard..cool writing.
raymondoantonio replied
THANX CHRIS!! THE MUSE POURED IT INTO ME IN ONE HIT!! JUST MINOR EDITING AND THAT’S IT!! LOVE IT WHEN THIS HAPPENS!!!