HEART AND SOUL

raymondoantonio
Author: raymondoantonio
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HEART AND SOUL

LANGUAGE WARNING!! I USE THE C-WORD!

INSPIRED BY A B-GRADE POET I KNEW WHO WROTE FOR THE LADIES!!

HEART AND SOUL belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Anger Management, Haiku - The Art of Japanese Poetry, Melbourne & Victoria and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!

YOU WRITE WITH YOUR COCK,

INSTEAD OF YOUR HEART AND SOUL.

YOU IMPRESS NO-ONE

  • Charma Chircop

    Charma Chircop

    This is tough one ..yep whats the use to write if we lose ‘the feeling’,feeling of heart and soul penned on paper..Charma

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THIS IS AIMED AT A CERTAIN POET I KNEW WHO USED POETRY AS A MEANS TO GET IT ON WITH AS MANY FEMALES AS HE COULD!! I WOULDN’T HAVE MINDED SO MUCH IF HIS POETRY WAS GOOD, BUT IT WASN’T!! THANX CHARMA!! SAHA!! X

  • Varry

    Varry

    Well that just hammers the nail on the head Ray!!! Straight to the point! ;-D xxxx

  • raymondoantonio replied

    STRAIGHT TO THE POINT!!! HAHAHHAHAHA!! THANX VARRY!! X

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    ummm ma, is this seems pointed at someone….

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THE MISCREANT TO WHOM I REFER IS NOT ON THIS SITE…....THANKFULLY!! X

  • -Lilith-

    -Lilith-

    Right!

  • -Lilith-

    -Lilith-

    Familiar….

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX LILITH!! X

  • Varry

    Varry

    Ray,i dont know who you are talking about btw,[ i just read you reply to my comment and then read the one you had written before that]......dont care,just words that seemed relevant to many things in life….

  • raymondoantonio replied

    SO TRUE VARRY, SOME GUYS WILL TRY ANYTHING TO GET A ….....!!!! XX

  • ForestGirl

    ForestGirl

    This reminds me of a very funny song I heard on BayFM one day about the ‘guitar man’ ... you know … that guy who hangs around at parties, only knows a few chords but spends the evening singing and playing while trying to pick up someone else’s girlfriend! Those idiots are everywhere it seems and truly impress no one! Tho you say it far more succinctly!!!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    YOU GOT IT FG!! WHETHER THEY TRY BAD POETRY OR BAD GUITAR, IT’S JUST A STUNT!! X

  • Goldenspirit

    Goldenspirit

    Was that an old saying “the cock is mightier than the sword” Just a thought but perhaps he was not trying to impress you. But just maybe it did impess his target audience. hehe.! :))

  • raymondoantonio replied

    HE ONLY IMPRESSED THE VERY STUPID OR THE VERY DRUNK!!!

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    ha! that sounds like it must have hurt. lol
    illegable as hell, too, I’d imagine.
    what a fool, ladies hate that!
    lol xo

  • raymondoantonio replied

    YES MOST SAW THROUGH HIM!!!! XO

  • lianne

    lianne

    LOL Raymondo – you don’t mince words. Whoever this was, I hope he got his comeuppance! Such an obvious ploy.

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX LIANNE!! HE DID!! XO

  • Normaje

    Normaje

    WELL, YOU CERTAINLY WROTE THOSE WORD, WHATS UP DOC, LOVE ALWAYS

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX NORMAJE!! X

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    How does he get it into the inkwell Ray?

  • raymondoantonio replied

    WITH NOT MUCH DIFFICULTY MATT!!!

  • Michael Degenhardt

    Michael Degenh...

    I respect the directness of this write and the clarity of the message within it. Your point is very well made. Michael

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX MICHAEL!

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    LOL You’re so constantly entertaining with your brutal and hilarious honesty!!! LOVE THIS!!! XOXOXO

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX SHAR!! A LITTLE HUMOUR GOES A LONG WAY!!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    XOXO!!

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    I love your passion and fire :) You just pour it out straight from your heart. This guy sounds like a total douche bag lol
    xoxoo

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX CHRISTIE!! YES HE WAS!! HE HATED ME BECAUSE I SAW THROUGH HIS BULLSHIT!!! XOXO

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    PS I just read Matt penfolds comment and LOST it laughing…..LMAO!!!!!!!!!!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    LAUGHTER IS THE BEST…....HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! XO

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Well that really puts a spin on a new term ” ink-dick” me thinks ;O) .... some people really should just keep things covered up and shutup….. I like the way you just get straight to the point Ray….you are the best in my books XXX

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX ARCADIA!! I AGREE!! XOXO

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    Oh Ray! So what do you call the ladies who write for the men…..? Not the “C” word I hope….hahaha!!! Oh GOD…..the comments on this are hilarious…...most dicks wouldn’t fit into an inkwell anyway….well….maybe my exhusbands would….muhahaha!! SO GLAD I am far away…..”’m on the floor…...are all artists this crazy xx

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    ....I am sure the Japanese would be thrilled with this one…..;-)) xx

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX JANE!!!! NOTHING WRONG WITH A BIT OF INSANITY!! HAHAHAHHAAA!! XOXO

  • Shulie1

    Shulie1

    That’s so funny – my first laugh of the day. Most men will never learn that it what is between the ears is more important – of course getting an idea is much harder than getting it up

  • raymondoantonio replied

    AMEN SHULIE!! MOST MEN HAVEN’T GOT A CLUE!! XO

  • warmsoul

    warmsoul

    I agree. Awsome write. I love this.

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX WARMSOUL!!!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Love it!!!!! xoxox

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX SALLY!!! XOXO

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Why does this ring a bell?
    Spot on Ray….......go you!!
    Nothing like a REAL poet I say!!
    xox

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX TRACEY!! TOO KIND!! XO

  • Arletta

    Arletta

    lol lol It’s crude, yet effective I was going to argue the point, and say that I’d be mightily impressed by anyone who could write via chicken .. but, the truth is, I often feel like this about people, as I’m sure you intended it. They tell me they are writers, as in they think they are artistic, but, in fact, all they are is people who write down the smarmy bits of fantasy that waft through their brain. And, it’s not even fantastical fantasy.

    I once read a really good story, about two people who were orbiting some place or another, as part of a scientific experiment to see how likely it was to work, people living in that cramped of quarters for an extremely long period of time, etc. because the Earth was all filled up and nasty, and a new planet had been found that would do, but, it was so far away, and it would cost so much to ship people out to it, etc. that unless the size of the ships could be severely minimized and etc. it wouldn’t be feasible.

    So, there was a lot of talk of how they were doing, and why they were doing what they were doing, and what was expected, and them receiving supplies and told to stay in orbit, when they had been looking forward to going home in some ways. And, then the Earth blew up and they decided to take off for this other planet.

    This was in Heavy Metal – the majority of the images were pictures of the couple engaged in sex, and in some very odd positions that they had finally achieved, after months of practice.

    Midnight Cowboy won awards for the acting in it, even though it was a porno, at a time when pornos were still quite illegal in many places and even though it had gay male stuffies in it back when it was illegal to be gay in many places …

    There is absolutely no excuse, no matter how many sleazy thoughts run through a person’s head, not to write from the heart, not to write to entertain instead of just to titillate or pander to. People who write with anything less .. well ..

    They are like the people who put two girls into a shower, snap a few quick pictures and then call them art. They think anything that is pornograph is art, due to being controversial. (sigh)

    Some pornography is art, some art is pornography – but, just because it’s one, doesn’t make it the other.

  • raymondoantonio replied

    ARIETTA, FIRST OF ALL THANX FOR READING AND REPLYING IN SUCH A COMPREHENSIVE AND INTELLIGENT FASHION!! SECONDLY I AGREE WITH YOU TOTALLY!! THIRDLY I’LL BE WATCHING YOU!! XO

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    ARIETTA, FIRST OF ALL THANX FOR READING AND REPLYING IN SUCH A COMPREHENSIVE AND INTELLIGENT FASHION!! SECONDLY I AGREE WITH YOU TOTALLY!! THIRDLY I’LL BE WATCHING YOU!! XO

  • Arletta

    Arletta

    (grin) I shall take that how I want to rahahahhahaha

  • princessleah

    princessleah

    There is always a time and a place for things, unfortunately some people think they’re “legends” and can get away with anything, surprisingly though, they have a following….I myself prefer to use my mind, show me something smart and something that will touch my soul anytime than random words or images of sleaze!!!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    AMEN!!! XO

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