SHIT FROM MELBOURNE

raymondoantonio
Author: raymondoantonio
Word Count: 141
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SHIT FROM MELBOURNE

Shit From Melbourne

The literary luminaries descended
Upon the windy city
For a night of piss and poetry.
They came from Melbourne
With a superior attitude,
Presuming the locals
Would listen to their verbose verse
And show some gratitude.
They bought their words
But forgot to bring their manners!
Talking and laughing while
The locals performed,
Yet expecting total concentration
When they themselves took to the stage.
“ Oh they’re from Melbourne!
They must be good! “
Well fuck that!
This little extrovert is unimpressed!
Bullshit is bullshit, it smells the same
In Melbourne or New York!
What impresses me,
Are passionate performers, sharing
Their thoughts and baring their souls.
Not some dandy from the “ big smoke “
Going through the motions
And depositing the same old smelly stool.
After all, it’s shit from Melbourne,
It must be good!!!

  • clarkey

    clarkey

    Hmmmmmm, I don’t know what event you’re referring to Raymondo, but, I’m assuming you mean Melbourne, Australia???? I’m from melbourne (Australia, and I would hope that if this is the Melbourne you’re referring to, we’re not all like your describe! I’m sorry you were exposed to such ill-mannere people.

  • raymondoantonio replied

    I’M REFFERING TO A POETRY GIG I HOST CALLED….. RAT RHYMES…..TRUE STORY, A GROUP OF B-GRADE POETS/ALCOHOLICS CAME TO BALLARAT AND BEHAVED LIKE DRUNKEN BORES!! THANK GOD THEY ARE IN THE MINORITY…I LIVED IN MELB FOR YEARS…...THANX CLARKEY!

  • clarkey

    clarkey

    :-))

  • raymondoantonio replied

    <( ^ __ ^ )>

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    LOL – nothing funny about rude people, but your sarcasm rocks. You tell em my friend, is all I can say and I have a very strong feeling you did!!! xoxoxo

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX SHAR!! THEY SOON GOT THE MESSAGE AND LEFT!!

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    LOL…. doesn’t everyone in Melbourne move there from the country….

  • raymondoantonio replied

    I THOUGHT IT WAS THE OTHER WAY AROUND!!

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    :-) xx

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX JANE!! XX

  • giovanni

    giovanni

    YU ARE THE MAN BROTHER…WITH YU 10000000000000000000000 %...get their filthy arrogant arses outta there… respect is everything…

  • raymondoantonio replied

    REPECT GIOVANNI!

  • giovanni

    giovanni

    this is for me the line as well… im getting pissed just thinking about it!!! lol mutha fukkas!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    I LIKE TO SPREAD THE JOY!!

  • lawrie .

    lawrie .

    It’s like rockstars moviestars politicians they all forget who put them there…...but when the dollars stop rolling in then they’ll be kissing arse an kissing babies….....Who wants to buy there stuff anyways….got the best for free on here….hmm hang on whose right ???

  • raymondoantonio replied

    AMEN LAWRIE!

  • giovanni

    giovanni

    love peace and joy! :)

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THANX GIOVANNI!!! L.. P…AND JOY…. OR ELSE!!!!!!

  • giovanni

    giovanni

    ahahahaaaa… amen tru dat!

  • bill bell

    bill bell

    You Aussies have got attitude to spare, I could see the spit flying from this one.

  • raymondoantonio replied

    I WAS ACTUALLY BORN IN MALTA AND BELIEVE ME ANY ONE CAN HAVE ATTITUDE!! JUST SEE BULLSHIT FOR WHAT IT IS AND LOUDLY AND BOLDLY TELL IT TO FUCK OFF!!
    THANX BILL BELL I SHALL BE WATCHING YOU!!!

  • linaji

    linaji

    your thread of BULLSHIT IS EXQUISITE.. I say this Ray.. you are somehow someone I would love to sit and Bullshit with awhile.. your beer and my tea.. would do just fuckin fine!! Big Hugs you SUPER STAR.. in my heart anyway!! Fuck those Melbourneians.. anyway… !!!!! I say! Tah!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    I SOMETIMES HAVE WONDERFUL DAY DREAMS…ONE OF THEM INVOLVED HAVING ALL MY FRIENDS FROM RB OVER FOR THE BIGGEST FUCKING PARTY IN THE WORLD!!!
    SO WHAT ARE YOU DOING NEXT WEEK?..........THANX LINAJI YOU ARE A SUPER NOVA!

  • eon man

    eon man

    Well stated. I attempted the move to the bush to leave the psueudo knowing of the big smoke behind. Local councils in the Bush however are now filled with Ex Melbournite Arseholes so my attempt to leave the Melbourne grid was thwarted. Half your luck for having a non city state of mind.

  • raymondoantonio replied

    ARSE-HOLES ARE EVERY WHERE NEOMAN…NON BASTARDUM CARBORUNDUM!!

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    HA! yes! smeely stools. lo you always crack me up. high-five for the shit-stinkers still stinking up the place, no matter the fuck WHERE they’re from! lol right on. love, K :)

  • raymondoantonio replied

    AMEN KRISTIN YOU TOO KNOW BULLSHIT WHEN YOU SMELL IT!! YOU ROCK!

  • AngelMay

    AngelMay

    A bit of Rat Rage going on here Ray….these sort of characters are always remembered because they stuff up the day so much but what I like about them is that they are characters and they add to the day in some form…shit or not….loved reading this!

  • raymondoantonio replied

    THERE WAS NOTHING LIKE ABLE ABOUT THEM! THEY WERE OBNOXIOUS BORES AND I TOOK GREAT PLEASURE IN TELLING THEM TO FUCK OFF! ALCOHOLICS!!!!!! FUCK THEM!

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