Scream
Scream belongs to the following groups:
"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Reaching Freedom, Safe Haven, Self as Other, Spiritual Art, The Healing Journey and THE SISTERHOOD“Scream”
Have you ever had something to say?
Then the moment came and you just looked away.
Have you ever really wanted to try?
Then found all you could do was cry.
Have you ever just needed someone who could understand?
Someone who would take your hand and hold you close.
Have you ever had so much to say…
That the words got in your way.
Have you ever felt emotions so raw?
That it tore at your heart like it had claws.
In solitude you try to find comfort
Tears of anguish stream,
As once again you stifle the scream.
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Y. Emerson 01-09
linifer
Yesssss!
RavenSoul replied
Thanks!
dpennyor
YESSSSSSS!!!!!
dpennyor
so awesome of a writing my dear frieind
RavenSoul replied
Thanks SOOOOO Much! hugs!
Druidstorm
To be understood is to be loved! Yet many never see the beauty that you are! Powerful words friend!!!...)o(
RavenSoul replied
Thank you hon = ) All is good.. Now.
sometimes writing what I cannot say helps all concerned = )
Ann Palframan
Great writing.
RavenSoul replied
Thank you Ann = )
DALE CRUM
Yes-
-For way too many years—I hope we both can find the safe haven where we can just let her rip Vonne!X
RavenSoul replied
lol Would be nice
Astoreth
So well written Raven….and I have often felt like this!! xx
RavenSoul replied
I imagine that unforunately we all have. Thank you for reading = )
Vanessa Anderberg
More than it is possoble to say, Vonne…this hits home with me
RavenSoul replied
Thanks Vanessa if I hit a nerve I know I did it right. Hugs
macquaid
The down side of the human condition,we harm ourselves by trying to control our emotions they are there for a reason.I go up to the mountains when I can no longer stifle the scream and just lose it .Funny how the animals don,t care.Regards.
RavenSoul replied
Always escaped to my animal friends and the woods when life became to much to handle as a child. Thanks hon
Rhenastarr
Nicely written.
RavenSoul replied
Thank you!
roy skogvold
How did you know ? ;)
Beautiful poem
Roy
RavenSoul replied
Unlucky guess ; ) Thanks Roy
raymondo
Well written Vonne….......xx
RavenSoul replied
Thanks Ray xx back
Paul Vanzella
...powerful stuff vonne….
RavenSoul replied
Thank you Paul = ) Glad you liked it
LoriSmaltz
I hear music. It sounds musical! Great.
RavenSoul replied
lol Thanks Lori
Kevyn Paul Eis...
Touche, my dear; well written.
RavenSoul replied
Thank you Kevyn xx
velveteagle
Bringing memories… Grasping the need.. Wondering If… We live… You are beautiful Vonne…
Chuck..
RavenSoul replied
As are you dear Chuck xx
Judi Corrigan
I think that you have summed up what so many of us feel at one time or another. Your words are powerful & poignant. Excellent
RavenSoul replied
Thank you Judi that means a lot to me hugs
Tracey Mac
Yes I have…but could never put it into words like you do….
RavenSoul replied
Thank you dear lady xx
Sally Omar
Absolutely!!!!!!!! Fantastic piece!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo
RavenSoul replied
Thank you!
poupoune
Outstanding!!!
RavenSoul replied
Thank you!
silverstrummer...
I have felt all those feelings that just seems to crush your soul and each time you want to cry out or even shout you can’t ….............. suffer in silence …......... people can accept but the longing to be loved and held is the only way out from the despair! Your words are so heartfelt and pure and thank you for these words as they help me too! – David :>))
RavenSoul replied
That makes my day David! Thank you!
Matsumoto
I refuse to answer that question on the grounds that it might incriminate me…signed, taking the 5th
skinnyman
so close to what I wanted to say as a child but could not. Thank you.
RavenSoul replied
Thank you for reading and sorry for the very late response
CLiPiCs
Don’t stifle it
let it out please
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss ♥
RavenSoul replied
Cant but art and writing helps = )
Lumase
A so powerful closure, well written.
RavenSoul replied
Thank you so much!
restlessd 24 days ago
Amazingly stated. Well done!
♥Rhonda
RavenSoul replied 24 days ago
Thanks so much Rhonda!