what does it feel like to have someone adore you
to have them dream of you day and night
what does it feel like to have someone want nothing more
than to hold you in their arms for eternity
what does it feel like to have someone in comlete bliss
because your legs and arms are wrapped around them while you sleep
What does it feel like to have someone satisfied with their life and in need of nothing else
because they met you and have you in their life
what does it feel like?
Cause I don’t know
- Paula Rodriguez ©
ufosIsee
I don’t know what comlete is but complete bliss is just so wonderful… And listen to your heart, not lustful thoughts…. Well written….....
Raindrops
thank you Ufoslee :)
VelvetGirl
this is very special. love all your writing. xx
Raindrops replied
thank you so much! your kind words mean the world to me :)
Andrew Wakelin
Awww, such innocence and hope in this short piece. I love the untainted idealism of it. I’d love to know the answer!
Raindrops replied
Me too, LOL.
I hope that you’re having a good day Andrew :)
Watertoy
Follow your heart BUT don’t let your heart rule your head…they say….now I’m confused. It feels good but for some reason doesn’t seem to last a life-time anymore. :(
Raindrops replied
I see what you mean. They’re saying to do so half heartedly LOL
No, a lifetime is only when we are in love for the first time and it seems like it will never end :)
Antanas
very good poetry
Raindrops
Thank you Antanas :)
Shanina Conway
Beautiful poem Rain….ah those moments of bliss, sadly they’re are fleeting so wallow in them when they happen because reality has a way of bursting bubbles;)
Raindrops
Indeed!
Thank you Shanina… (smile)
redsirens
you write so deep, I love your work! <3>