the secret

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Author: rain-dogs
Word Count: 144
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the secret

a secret that everyone knows

the secret belongs to the following groups:

***♂♥♥QUORN♥♥♀, Core [C.O.R.E], Peace Love & Happiness Hippies and Put Out! or Get Out!!!

id like to tell you a secret one that you already know
it’s in all that’s ever lived and everything that’s grown

in every leaf and flower and every bird that’s flown
in every rock and river and every breeze that’s blown

in every cloud that gathers and all the sun that shines
it’s in every heart that rambles and every step in time

in all the rain that’s fallen and every star that’s born
it’s in every midnight calling to every day at dawn

in every spirit waking and every story shared
in every friend youve had and every word youve heard

its in all that’s ever thought and every smile youve seen
in every tear you tasted and everywhere youve been

its in all there ever is and everything that’s true
and the one place it lives is inside of you……

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    This is powerful…truly compelling. Very beautiful writing. :)

  • rain-dogs replied

    thanx erika15 glad u like the words i find to share….cheers

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi rain-dogs – Beautifully written fantastic ryhme ….......... I like this following line “its in all that’s ever thought and every smile youve seen in every tear you tasted and everywhere youve been”
    Brilliant writing …...a fav for me! – David :>))

  • rain-dogs replied

    thanx david….glad u enjoyed it cheers

  • Marlo11

    Marlo11

    Absolutely precious poem mate. You’re right . . . it is a secret I already know. And yet still not! I love the subtle emotion hidden in the imagery throughout this piece. Thanks for sharing. Cheers. Marls. :)

  • rain-dogs replied

    thanx for stopping by and sharing a secret with me…..cheers

  • Vanessa Barklay

    Vanessa Barklay

    I’ve been waiting for this, I knew it was coming… thank you for sharing mate xx

  • rain-dogs replied

    thought it time to have some writing in the group….........cheers

  • SilverQueen

    SilverQueen


    Congratulations – You took me on A Spiritual Walk – Beautiful
    SQ

  • rain-dogs replied

    am well happy…..is good to get featured thanks SQ

  • Alecs Lindsay

    Alecs Lindsay

    amazing, it just game me goose bumps.

  • rain-dogs replied

    thanx alec that means a lot to me am well happy it gave you goosebumps….cheers

  • gemini63

    gemini63

    Wow you had me gripped from the very beginning that doesn’t happen often :)

  • rain-dogs replied

    thanx gemini…......am so glad you enjoyed this…......cheers

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    how beautiful ….

  • rain-dogs replied

    thanx karin….....im sure its a secret youve known for many years….....cheers

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