Venus, 2008
With No Immediate Cause
By Ntozake Shange
(pronounced en-to-zaki shong-gay)
every 3 minutes a woman is beaten
every five minutes a
woman is raped/every ten minutes
a lil girl is molested
yet i rode the subway today
i sat next to an old man who
may have beaten his old wife
3 minutes ago or 3 days/30 years ago
he might have sodomized his
daughter but i sat there
cuz the young men on the train
might beat some young women
later in the day or tomorrow
i might not shut my door fast
every 3 minutes it happens
some woman’s innocence
rushes to her cheeks/pours from her mouth
like the betsy wetsy dolls have been torn
apart/their mouths
menses red & split/every
three minutes a shoulder
is jammed through plaster and the oven door/
chairs push thru the rib cage/hot water or
boiling sperm decorate her body
i rode the subway today
& bought a paper from a
man who might
have held his old lady onto
a hot pressing iron/i don’t know
maybe he catches lil girls in the
park & rips open their behinds
with steel rods/i can’t decide
what he might have done i only
know every 3 minutes
every 5 minutes every 10 minutes/so
i bought the paper
looking for the announcement
the discovery/of the dismembered
woman’s body/the
victims have not all been
identified/today they are
naked and dead/refuse to
testify/one girl out of 10’s not
coherent/i took the coffee
& spit it up/i found an
announcement/not the woman’s
bloated body in the river/floating
not the child bleeding in the
59th street corridor/not the baby
broken on the floor/
there is some concern
that alleged battered women
might start to murder their
husbands & lovers with no
immediate cause”
i spit up i vomit i am screaming
we all have immediate cause
every 3 minutes
every 5 minutes
every 10 minutes
every day
women’s bodies are found
in alleys & bedrooms/at the top of the stairs
before i ride the subway/buy a paper/drink
coffee/i must know/
have you hurt a woman today
did you beat a woman today
throw a child across a room
are the lil girl’s panties
in yr pocket
did you hurt a woman today
i have to ask these obscene questions
the authorities require me to
establish
immediate cause
every three minutes
every five minutes
every ten minutes
every day.
Foot note: I am just an artist, not an activist.
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coppertrees
Outstanding work Rabi, BRAVO
Rabi Khan replied
thank you so much, Vickie! thank you for continuous support!
Gili Orr
Is your Venus aching for all of womandkind, Rabi? Beautiful image, strong text… who is this writer?
Rabi Khan replied
few days back I woke up with a scream and noise of falling something …next morning, I saw a young lady with bruise one her face…she was the girl next door. Thank you Gili!
I found the poet at http://www.scils.rutgers.edu/~cybers/shange2.html
TeriLee
WOW!! Your work is always beautiful…but you really have out-done yourself…this is amazing!!! And your writing is terrific…truly a masterpiece of art!!!

Rabi Khan replied
Wow! that’s a great compliment.
yes, poet Ntozake Shange has done this very moving poem.. thank you so much.
April Mansilla
power and beauty in this ..thank you for such a strong message of hope and awareness!!
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you, April!
I knew you will like this… lets hope it works…to build awareness…
artist4peace
MY BEAUTIFUL RABI
I am going to be honest with you….
when this one started showing…I said ,oh. thats me when I was younger!
and then I read the side after it caught my eye…..
I am a survivor of 3 male rapes….It has taken much work ,support and prayer to transform the confusion, fear and self-hate those events imposed on me as a young girl and again as a woman.
I told you I recognized you as having a great mission…. it is ordinary men ,who make extra~oridnary choices and lift this life to higher places. /I declare am your partner,I will support you and I will cheer you. I will drink your tears for they are pure and sweet and the salt washes and heals.
I did a presentation once.In a room of more than 100 people,mixed,I had every 3rd person stand , then we were silent for 3 min.Then I read th information you shared. Then I said we were standing,for every episode NOT reported for fear and every person that had died unreported and only silence,and not standing up would keep it that way…
THANK YOU ,Rabi.YOU are a wonderful human BEing.Thank you for your heart and your work . I would like to see us do a collaboration….I would be honored if you would give this consideration.Sincerly,DalzeniaA4P
Rabi Khan replied
I’m just overwhelmed.
Sure we can collaboration! that;s a great idea…
mago
Venus…ochre Venus
Venus…yellow Venus
abstract image of Venus, magically emotion, Venus
That what you are, the Rabi’s Venus
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much, poet mago!
valzart
Oh my this is a stunning piece of art ..a real golden girl..so spiritual ;} Val hugzz
Rabi Khan replied
Oh Val! always great sunshine at you presence.
thank you for inspiring comments.
lex7
Very powerful piece.. exceptional job.
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much, Alexa! I am glad you liked it!
Arletta
I get this, I do .. but I also get the difference between “cause” and “immediate cause” It’s the same thing that makes the difference between murder and self defense, even when someone is attacking you. Sadly, they have to make the distinctions.
If I had killed my Ex, which I did not, it would not have been “immediate cause” because it was a slow grinding torture of mostly mental abuse and entrapment that he put me through. However, it would also have been temporary insanity, because of the same reasons. Except I probably never could have proved it.
I didn’t kill him because I believe in God. It doesn’t stop you from reaching the end of your rope, belief in God, but, it can help you constantly find a new end to the rope. ... at least, that’s the way I felt, then.
However, to comment on the bit about reading how this happens or that, I found that there is nothing worse for personal harmony or harmony between peoples – whether separated by race, sex, religion, nation, or what have you – than to read the propaganda of people against other people.
I do not read Feminist literature, as it sways people towards violence.against other people by alleging that all the males are monsters that do nothing but commit atrocities against women all day long and that if any woman cares for these men she is a traitor to her own vagina.
The fact is, some men rape zero women, beat zero women, molest zero females. Some get accused of it falsely, some get accused of it and it’s not exactly false but the area is sort of gray: they are both drunk, she says yes and then she says no. He is now a rapist for continuing, when she is too incapacitated to make a sane and healthy choice, but so is he, so … and some men rape 100 women, go home and beat their wife, and then molest their daughter. So, does that make them all monsters? No! It makes some monsters, some persons with monstrous tendencies who have learned to control them over time, some confused , and some lovely individuals.
I don’t read literature against females, by the way, for the same basic reason. Either way, it lends the same basic flavor to life and breeds ostracism and hatred. I don’t want to hate .. so I don’t read about that sort of hate.
I know it exists, just like I know a lot about WWII. I don’t read Mein Kampf either! Or however you spell it.
All that being said, dig the painting! and I think both it and the writing really say something deep, and, yes, necessary. It’s a painful and confused world out there. Sometimes it’s best, as they say, to walk softly and carry a big stick. The trick is the walking softly!
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much, Arletta! For your thoughtful comments, which is incredibly alive with insight into the issue. I could not agree more with your last word “The trick is the walking softly!”
mago
congrats for Featured this work in Current Issues group!!!
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much, mago! my friend.
I appreciate your support in my logo for Current Issues group. I loved your explanation.
Ruth Palmer
The painting, the writing….speechless. God Bless you Rabi!
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much, Ruth! My friend!
Great have you back!
Lior Goldenberg
Powerful piece and writing!
Rabi Khan replied
Thanks a lot, Lior
Taylor Sawyer
Congrats on your feature! You are now invited to enter
this piece into The Best of Yellow
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much! I am honored!
Thank you for the invitation
Jolie
Wonderful work & so great to see it highlighted in the best of yellow!
Beautifully done!
Rabi Khan replied
Thank you so much Jolie! my friend.