Glorified.
This was written at a time when I needed to be saved.
Sometimes someone else sees what you need much clearer than you do.
I use the word glorified as a way of expressing my gratitude.
Glorified. belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalOnce upon a time I had a feeling that was mine,
Then I shared it with a friend and it was all that I could send.
Over hills and far away I pass the age of changing ways,
And the grass will grow across the fields that I will pass along the way.
This journey that I take with all the blindness that it fakes,
And all the dreams that will prevail across the seas that I will sail.
Holding back the fears that promised so much yesterday,
With auburn hair and golden lips she took all my cares away.
In the darkness you might find in my heart the guiding light.
There’s nothing left that’s holding me so I guess I’ll always be…
Glorified.
Jeff Burns
Wow this is very powerful and awesome. Great work Paul.
Very Touching.
Melinda Kerr
You big spunk! Great heart PLV.
Jessica Tremp
you’re such a softy…and we love you so much for that…x mwah!
Julie Langford
Lovely powerful writing Paul, a great message of gratitude and thanks within
Bones
This is great, its such a nice fable. Great piece.
binjy
Nice…. it flows :)
Paul Louis Vil...
Yikes!!
You guys are quick, I was still correcting spelling errors! LOL!
By the way, you are all too kind for words!
Jeff, Melly (blush!!), Jess (mwah 2 u 2!!), Julie, Rhys (love your new avatar!) and binjy! :D
Gerard Rotse
Great wording Paul and well written.
Rhana Griffin
Holding back the fears that promised so much yesterday,
With auburn hair and golden lips she took all my cares away.
There is a song in that Paul… so beautiful… How on earth do you thank your saviour? I think the only way is to give them your love.
Every.
Single.
Day.
cdwork
Beautiful flowing words
StacyLee
This is so touching and beautiful Paul!!
Lisa Jewell
Oh my…..this is very beautiful and evoking….
XOXO
David Haviland
Heartfelt and powerful, great work.
Paul Louis Vil...
Thank you so very much Gerard, Rhana, cdwork, StacyLee, LisaG (mmmmmm, chocolate slice!!) and David! :D
pinkyjain
This is beautiful Paul, lovely writing, really wonderful
Tony Middleton
well written and streaming from the heart – wonderful piece Paul :)
Paul Louis Vil...
Thanks very kindly pinkyjain and Tony! :D
Wendy Slee
what “heart” emerges in these words…. well expressed Paul!
bodymechanic
great words PLV there’s a song in that 4 sure! u are a truly amazing bloke aye, with sum amazing talents!
Michael Alesich
Great piece Paul.
It’s hard sometimes to see the emotion someone else has below the surface.
Other times it’s so hard to see your own. I personally am overjoyed that you were saved and so I could meet a photographer and person such as yourself.
Paul Louis Vil...
Such kind and thoughtful words from two wonderful and unique people that ‘ve had the pleasure to know… Steve (bodymechanic) and Michael! :D
transmute
Glorified to read this
PhotogeniquE IPA
yes – was it Burns who said, Oh to see ourselves as others see us. Sometimes you do need someone else to steer you through. Great writing.
Paul Louis Vil...
Thank you so much Chris (I took the safety of using your real name as your avatar name changes daily!!!! LOL!!) and photogenique! :D
jadekrapsen
Fabulous, superb…. I don’t remember what I was going to say…, because the cold medicine took away my brain…. sigh Great work, though!
Paul Louis Vil...
LOL! I hope you get your brain back real soon! :D
Thanks jadekrapsen!
ladyb
“once upon a time i had a feeling that was mine” genius
Paul Louis Vil...
Thank you kindly ladyb! :D
checkma8
V nice work
emmyjewel
Paul, your writing is fascinating and so are you