The Beauty of You

Compared to the ages,
We have seen the shortest time.
But the heart beat of joy quickens,
At our emotional entwine.
In suspended happiness I remain,
Gazing in awe into my life’s abyss.
For I have found the inspiration for each breath,
And the ever present wanting of just one more kiss.
Along the way there’ll be those who warn of things that are too good to be true.
I pity their ignorance.
For they know not the beauty of you.

  • zee1

    zee1

    AAAHHHHHH, that is so lovely, you romantic!! It would make a gorgeous wedding poem. As a bustling bloke you could probably on sell it to some bustling blokes that just want to say the above but just can’t find the words.

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thanks Zee1!

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman

    Hey thats great Paul. I read it a few times and it’s still great. Thanks for sharing it with us bubblers.

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thank you kindly Robert!

  • Loredana Crupi

    Loredana Crupi

    Glad you chose not to remain anonymous :-) beautifully expressed sentiment!

  • Leia

    Leia

    Took my breath away.
    Now if you could just pass-on this talent of yours to the rest of the male community out there…..

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Blushing! Thank you Loredana and Leia!

  • dahimages

    dahimages

    Well who ever she is I hope she appreciates a man with words…not to be underestimated I feel…beautiful Paul…really lovely..

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thank you Dahimages! :)

  • robert murray

    robert murray

    very nice Paul I also used to write poetry/songs and I might post one or two later on

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    I’ve just seen your work on the Home Page! Fantastic treborbob! Thank you for the nice compliment too!! :):):) You are very kind!

  • adam lewis

    adam lewis

    yes paul lets do it for the big lads! if my rugby friends found out i wrote poem, bloody hell! then id have to remind them that my girlfriend is far more attractive than theirs!all about the sensitive side lads. listen and learn. were pioneers paul and dont you forget it pal

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Pioneers of new frontiers! Well maybe not ;p but it sure sounds good! I like the way you think Adam, as long as we keep creating and the fella’s at the Cricket Clubs don’t find out we’re safe!! :D:D:D

  • plvcards

    plvcards

    Purchase this poem on a card in these variations…
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  • sweetmiseryxx

    sweetmiseryxx

    ..So beautiful.
    the last line just brings it together.
    how can you not adore this piece.
    it would make any lover melt into their lover’s arms in awe.
    well done.

    xo

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thank you so very much sweetmiseryxx! :D

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  • ElizabethE

    ElizabethE

    Very nice….......................!!!

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thank you very kindly Sylvia and Elizabeth! :D

  • Megan Eckersley

    Megan Eckersley

    So relevant – close to home!! Ahh!
    Beautifully written, well done. =]
    God Bless,
    Megan

  • emmyjewel

    emmyjewel

    To me, this says.. i will love, i will give, i may hurt but i will live. to feel and embrace is to live. i love the way you think and express yourself.

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