Immerse and Surrender

Thank you StacyLee! :d

ooooops! What in the world was that :d ?? LOL!!
I meant to do this :D!!!

This is fantastic Paul. Man are you talented. I love it

You are very kind Jeff, thank you! :D

Oh and Congrats on the engagement!

Paul,

Congratulations on your upcoming nuptials….

Your writing prowess dazzles my mind….these lines “My eyes without you are forlorn, I bequeath you with all that I am.” Take me on a journey of your heart…

Anna is a very lucky woman…

What a lovely suprise! This is beautiful Paul.
Congratulations on your engagement.
All the best to you both!

blush!
Thanks LisaG!
I’m a very lucky bloke too! :D

Thanks heaps Chanel! :D

amazing words..full of meaning..lucky Anna…all the best to you both…great to see romance and passion still exist…

Only 8000 times a day? You’re slipping Mr Romantic! Beautiful work.

JUST WONDERFUL WORDS

awww….I’m so pleased for you both….what a lovely poem, PLV!

Thank you so much Kim , Kitsmumma (LOL!) and Henry! :D

Thank heaps Mel! :D

Congratulations! Not only are you a talented artist photographer but a brillant poet. Wish you both much happiness!

if that doesn’t give us hope, i don’t know what will…that’s what love is about isn’t it?

oh and by the way, CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Congratulations and I’m sure that you’ll find many Bubblers to be softies =)

As for the poem, very nice, and “syncopation” is an exceptional word choice.

wow, Paul, that is deep and beautiful….

Ohhhhhhhh Ohhhhhhhhh Ohhhhhhhhhh I’m so happy for you Paul and now you have someone to write all about, can’t wait for the pooy nappy songs your gonna sing….........hahah Just jokes mate…........congrats…..........xkc

To celebrate this…..... I will open a bottle of FRENCH CHAMPAGNE !
FELICITATIONS and my very sincere compliments Paul :)
xx

Paul that is truly lyrically beautiful. SWOON

Beautiful Paul, Permeates the chambers of the heart…I hear on the bubblevine you are about to tie the love knot.. congratulations,salutations bubbleations to you…..adore each other…yay..x

Thanks everyone!
Jessica (You are spot on! It is what it’s all about!), moosedesigns (Somehow my love for all things musical seems to transcend into other works! I can’t help it!!), Wendy, Karen (Now now, I’m a hard rockin’ fella, no soooopy, pooooy or naaaapy songs from me mate! ... ok, maybe one or two!! LOL!), Marie (French Champagne, cheers my friend!), LisaDee and Jewd!! :D

wow…that’s amazing.

Thanks so much asolaiiy! :D

Mate, if that doesn’t tip the balance, nothing will. Congrats!

LOL! Damn straight!! Thanks Brett! :D

Beautiful work

Thanks DannC!! Mate your avatar is freaking me out!! LOL!!

Congratulations. These are beautiful, heartfelt words, your lady is truly fortunate. You have an amazing gift to share.

Great words Paul… you are always an inspiration!

all i can say is, “AWWWWWWW”

Thank you for your wonderful comments!
Lumineux, Enrico and Hermosa! :D

Oh ! I wish love for ever and ever,so romantic.

Thank you very kindly micmac!! :D

Yay! This is on the hot list :)!!!

blush
Thanks StacyLee! :O)

This is lovely Paul :o)

alright enough already…I already know you are an angel in the human form..with so much
kindness and spiritual love surrounding you…the list of your gifts seem endless my friend…
are you sure youre REAL LOL!!!!! Love ya, Trish …all my best for a future filled with light,love,
faith, and peace…may all of these follow you and Anna in your lifes journey together!!!!!!!!

Congratulations! Beautiful words, well done my friend!

Thanks so very much Helene, Trish (LOL! You are very kind to say such things! Peace and love back to you and yours!) and Mundy! :D

awww, BIG Congratulations Paul!!!
Happy wedding planning to the both of you, warm wishes xx

Beautiful words, Paul, and so full of passion. Congratulations on your happiness.

Thanks so much Helen and aaria! :D

SUperb- Lucky woman

Congratulations and Muzeltov on your engagement Paul, you have composed such charming amorous words to Anna she must be delighted.
All the best for a wonderful future together.
Ronald

Thanks so much cdwork and Ronald (so kind and beautiful are your words Ronald!! :D) !!

Beautiful words! Congratulations on your engagement Paul, the very best to you and Anna!! Heather :)

That’s very kind of you! Thanks so much Heather! :D

Beautiful words Paul!

Thank you kindly Antoine! :D

Ooo. Ooo. I’m a bit lost for words. What an amazing gift for her. Absolutely beautiful!

Love!

this is lovely – congratulations too!

That is lovely!! Congrats to you both!!

I’m drowning in your words here Paul…. And as I take my last breath I realise… its all good! Beautiful piece indeed.

whoa mega comments there… and rightly so!
rock on kimosabe

Oh SHIT! I forgot to say CONGRATULATIONS!!!

bloody brilliant

Thank so very much!! Anna and I have just sat down to have a look and she is blown away by the kindness shown by all you bubblers!! Emma, Catalin, Lou, Deborah, Rhana (LOL!), siskos and parmas! :D

paul this is breathtaking, what a lucky girl to be getting hitched to a wordsmith like you! imagine how eloquent your kids will be!

congratulations too!

Brilliant !

Ah JulieJulie! If my Mother ever reads your comment she would probably be rolling on the floor in hysterics!! I can only hope that my children befriend eloquence at a much earlier age than I!! Thank you so much for your beautiful comment!!
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Googa, you are a champion mate! :D

What a joy it is to see you declare for her your love…unabashed! Refreshing!

Thank you very kindly loramae! :D

the only gags will be in admiration.

She should love it – full of heart emotion.

And BTW – we’ve been married 35 years and still say I love you to each other, almost daily. So never stop saying it.

Paul – this is an enchanting and passionate piece – I hope a special woman reads this from you.

Suzanne

...as usual…i click enter then read….retrospectie thinking…too impulsive!!!

Just read your description and realised that you HAD writtent his for a special woman – your fiancee – great work of love Paul – if this comes from your heart – she should never ever doubt you!
I’m really glad to read about people sharing so much love – I wish you both a wonderful engagement!

Suzanne

Awwwww, you guys are the nicest in the whole wide world!! Love to Lightsmith, photogenique and Suzanne! :D

Oh Paul!!! This is beautiful! So romantic….I wish you guys so much happiness and love ;)

Hugs!

You’re a gem LittleHelen! Thanks so much! :D

Beautiful poem and congrat on being engaged.

Thank you very kindly KSeriphyn! :D

Wow, very powerful and full of passion, beautiful words

P.S. Only just remembered to read your comments, Anna is a lucky lady., congrats on your engagement and best wishes for the future :D

Thank you so very much wildaboutphotos! :D

“My eyes without you are forlorn” – that is such a perfect line. Lovely words.

p.s Congrats ! Keep on enjoying each others love and devotion! And the eight thousand “I Love You’s” per day :)

Thank you kindly MissKristy! :D

Absolutely beautiful ….

Thank you kindly brummieboy :D

Fantastic poem. Short does not take away a thing of the depth you present. Write on…

Thanks so very much Russell! :D

Congratulations on the engagement. Your poem is stunning, it’s inspiration what most of us seek.

Thank you kindly Lilyzuhur! :D

Wonderful and very touching. Thank you for sharing!

this is absolutely beautiful, you are both lucky to have each other… may your love grow stronger dy by day.. :))

Thank you so very kindly byebye and Metamorphosis! :D

That’s so beautiful…
Best Wishes to you both and Good Luck with all the planning!
God Bless.
Megan

Thank you so very kindly Megan! :D

very beautiful and well thought :)