Bits & Pieces #2

Paul Louis Villani

Bits & Pieces #2

The description below is the same as the last Bits and Pieces thingy, so if you have read it before you can give it a miss! :D

Throughout the years I’ve tended to write in fits and spurts…
A lot of things were started and perhaps not finished or perhaps did not need finishing and better left as they were.
Some writings are reflective, some philosophical and some… well, some are just there.
Anyway, rather than release 6 billion items onto your activity monitors I thought I’d share a few bits and pieces with you in one upload.
Enjoy,
...bit nervous about putting these out there… too much of me may be exposed here…
Peace peeps! :D

Bits & Pieces #2 belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Melbourne & Victoria and WMG

It offends my perception,
To accept this rejection,
Never known less than perfection,
Never veered from my direction.
You! You dismiss me with ease,
With my emotion you tease,
Turn your nose at my needs,
Just like your attitude your blood’s on the freeze!
“Write me a poem.” She will say.
“I want it now, I want it today.”
You shake your head with contempt.
Every word she said she meant.
She will let you know right from the start,
She’s never wrong, she’s just so smart.
Her conversation hath no art.
Always talk about others and never about your heart.


You arrived just in time to see my fall from grace.
I’ve spent the last three years running.
Running at full pace.
There’s a storm brewing.
A storm of confrontation between my past and what I have become.
Every possible cliché comes to mind to describe change.
If something I used to do was no good for me, why am I still paying for its mistakes?
Artificial augmentation of the mind has yet to be invented,
I’ll be first in line.
Plastic surgery for the subconscious…
I’d like to get some of that!



If there is immediate attraction does it mean that love will last forever?
And in a moments hesitation your destiny has altered it’s course.
You are now condemned to the thoughts of what you could’ve been.
To deal with destiny is most ungracious.
How quickly can the butterflies in you stomach turn to lead?
For the next half-hour there is nothing anyone can say or do that will make you feel any better.
A liquid discharge that’s impossible to hold back loudly signifies your humility.
You are now a picture of defeat.
But, being as superficial as the next human being we know you will try again.
The instinctive need of attraction and acceptance leads us all easily.



With a sincere approach to life, I succumb.
Have I finally accepted what is to become?


Iron a line in my pants,
Portray it as a sign of class.
But it’s just a line in the pants of a poor man.
Where is he to use all this class?
I’ll use some class to collect my less than minimum wage.
I’ll use some class as I pay the interest off a 20-year loan.
Oh, I’ll use some class as I shop at Savers.
Now the line in my pants is faded.
Almost non-existent.
Washed out, rinsed and hung out to dry in a poor suburb,
In a not so classy suburb.
Look out pants here comes the iron!



I am innocent.
I am pure.
I’ve seen things that I wish I had not endured.
I conduct myself in a way that leaves no doubt,
No doubt that I don’t need you to make my life complete.
I was once a masterpiece without any bias, always proudly put on display.
I still believe I am the same old masterpiece that’s just been put away.
I guess I’m an over-rated under achiever,
A never have been, never will be and never was to.
I’m still very innocent and pure.



It’s so simple, yet so complicated.
I’ve tried to remain cool but now am frustrated.
All my feelings of anger have been negated.
With the effort I am making I hope you are elated.
I’m tense and suffering from sleep deprivation.
Another week of this and I’m headed for damnation.
I want things to be simple without complication.
Easy to criticize while practising relaxation.
…and yet here we are in our web of design,
our plans go askew when things seem just fine.


I met a girl on a Friday night.
By the time Sunday came rolling by we’d not spent a moment apart.
But, this was not about love,
This was about hopes and dreams.
We found that we had a lot in common,
Including a failure to achieve.
She began to cry so I held her and caressed her Auburn hair.
She said “I don’t know why I’m here and I don’t know from what it is I’m running.”
I said “stop running and just be here with me, I may be all that you need.”

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl

    Plastic surgery for the subconscious…
    I’d like to get some of that!

    Meeee toooo! Brilliant stream of consciousness piece!!!

  • Elenne Boothe

    Elenne Boothe

    POWERFUL!!! and so deep. love it!! so amazing your writing is, Wow!!
    ” If something I used to do was no good for me why am I still paying for it’s mistakes”
    That’s so deep. love that. Elenne

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thank you very kindly deliriousgirl and Elenne! :D

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Fantastic…...I love your bits and pieces….

    I can’t go passed the last one…..awwwwwwwwww romantic indeed…

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    LOL! Thanks LisaG! :D

  • aglaia b

    aglaia b

    very entertaining bits and pieces paul.
    i really enjoyed this one:

    Iron a line in my pants,
    Portray it as a sign of class.
    But it’s just a line in the pants of a poor man.
    Where is he to use all this class?
    I’ll use some class to collect my less than minimum wage.
    I’ll use some class as I pay the interest off a 20-year loan.
    Oh, I’ll use some class as I shop at Savers.
    Now the line in my pants is faded.
    Almost non-existent.
    Washed out, rinsed and hung out to dry in a poor suburb,
    In a not so classy suburb.
    Look out pants here comes the iron!

    and the last one of course! ;-) xox

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thanks heaps aglaia b! :D

  • Karen Cougan

    Karen Cougan

    You blow me away mate…......I wish I had a tenth of your talent…............
    xkc

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Oh stop it!! ;p
    You’re just waaaaaay too kind Karen, thank you!

  • Jess Andrews

    Jess Andrews

    All of these are brilliant! Love them

  • Ronald Rockman

    Ronald Rockman

    Pretty powerful words Paul, you really hit hard on the emotional side, I’m sure we can all relate to them.
    Excellent work.
    Rock

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    Thank you so very kindly Jessica and Rock! :D

  • halftone

    halftone

    You’re gorgeous AND talented! Love reading these, PLV :)

  • Paul Louis Villani

    Paul Louis Vil...

    You’re making me blush…. big time! ;p
    Thanks so much halftone!

  • Beve Brown-Clark

    Beve Brown-Clark

    Enjoyed your bits & pieces…very thought provoking, the view inside of us all…Plastic surgery for the subconscious…sign me up!

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