About you...
I think it is self explanatory!
I’m painting pictures of you,
Yet I don’t have the skills.
I’m sure the colors I choose,
Will not do you justice.
I’m singing songs about you,
Yet I can’t hold a tune.
My guitar neck is stained with blood,
From anxious fingers yearning for a melody.
I keep day dreaming of you,
Yet I keep getting interrupted.
This may be a good thing,
Just in case my thoughts become naughty!
I’m writing books about you,
Yet I’ve run out of pages.
My thesaurus is pained because it is struggling to define,
The depth of your being.
I’m having dinner with you,
Yet I don’t feel like eating.
Your smile has me lynched,
And your dress… I know you wore that on purpose!
I’m getting married to you,
Yet 190 days still remain to pass,
Until we stand together and make those promises,
To forever be on the same path.
Jessica Tremp
she’s one hell of a lucky girl Paul…
Lisa Defazio
Such a lucky beautiful woman….just so heartfelt Paul, lovely, lovely stuff.
MissKristy
I am sure words don’t come close to the feelings you two share…but you have done an exquisite job of expressing yourself here, Paul.
Truly beautiful.
Tara Sheffer-A...
That is very well thought out and written! Great choice of expression here!!!
midzing
this is so beautiful Paul…. could you teach my partner to write something like this for me!! lol.,.... There will be one happy lady when she reads this,,, well done
Lisa Jewell
This is just so romantic, beautiful and tender…..gorgeous, gorgeous and LOVING…..
Love it XOXOX
Here starts the countdown…..hehe
Mark German
Both beautiful people that deserve each other :)
xxx
Luckyvegetable
you’re ace, Big Bear =)
hug hug huggggg!
Barbara Rahal
ohhhh what a beautiful poem….what an awesome way to say it out loud!!!
Mel Brackstone
You gorgeous thing you. We’ll all be on hand to count down with you!!
Karen Cougan
Beautiful Paul, she is a lucky girl
xkc
Juilee Pryor
beautiful …... so lovely…..lucky lady
lifevibrations
Wow two more souls blessed to know the depths of romantic love! Great sharing of heart felt emotions.
PJ Ryan
ohhh that’s beautiful :)
coffeebean
That is so lovel, truly beautiful, wow lucky girl…a romantic loving man not afraid to tell the world he loves his girl…...how great you have both found each other….all the best on the countdown and forever after.
Mia1
Awesome
jumpy
so what did you do wrong…. ;P
beautiful!!
Brett Foster
You lucky, lucky man! Good on you Paul!
HeidiD
Absolutely lovely Paul!
Susan Grissom
Beautiful poem, she is one lucky lady
jadekrapsen
I’m not sure it’s “self explanatory” like you said it is. I mean, sure, it explains itself in that explanatory of oneself way, but…is anything REALLY “self explanatory?” :D Sorry, I’ve been awake too long and I get a bit doofy…. Great poem!
Paul Louis Vil...
Thanks so much Susan and jadekrapsen (Now go and get some sleep!!) :D
StacyLee
Wow Paul this is so romantic! What a lucky woman!
Sarah Lombart
Soooooooo romantic :-)
Wonderful words…for,I’m sure, a wonderful woman!Congrats both of you!
cdwork
Beautiful words
Paul Louis Vil...
Thanks so very kindly StacyLee, Sarah and cdwork! :D
Gerijuliaj
What a wonderful poem Paul. Brought a tear to my eye as it was so heartfelt and romantic. Congrats to you both – your talents never cease to amaze me!
LittleHelen
Oh gorgeous….(hugs)
Paul Louis Vil...
Thanks so very kindly Gerijuliaj and LittleHelen! :D
Rhana Griffin
Ok… so this would have to be a incredibly beautiful way for me to start my day reading this. You are chocolate covered candy with a gooey soft caramel centre Paul… your lady certainly lucked out with you!
jianina
AwWwWwww>>>luck girl!!>>>beautiful poem of your devotion for her!!>>it shows that you are madly in love!! Congrats on the future marrige!!
(of course she wore the dress on purpose) :)