drummer beats

PunkNotFunk
Author: PunkNotFunk
Word Count: 108
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drummer beats

my brother is in the army and i felt like i should write him a poem or something.

drummer beats belongs to the following groups:

Writing: Persuing Happiness

i hear drummer beats, everything slows down and i feel warm rivers flowing out of me. gunpowder, copper, lead, and the blood stained sands fill my nose.
the light is so bright i can’t see for a second. my ears ringing and my thoughts so blurry.

one,two… i count to myself… i breath in, then out… as the last of my breath escapes my mouth i flex my index finger and thunder echos in the air… in a split second i’m on the ground… shadows rushing to my side. i fade slowly from conciousness. as the rest of me goes i still hear drummer beats.

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    Nice dedication. Sweet and endearing poem

  • PunkNotFunk replied

    thanks

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    your welcome

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    I got lots of not so friendly-fire images in this one, dark and haunting.. >_< maybe it is just the way I read it?

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