she says ok lets give it a try
so she passionately gets me
to her point of no return
then the pouring of oil
erotic moans as i slide in
deeper, and deeper i go
it hurts so i slow down
i tell to touch herself
deeper, and deeper i go
she moans, and she moans
they’re getting louder
a slow pace becomes a wild feast
suddenly i become a untameable beast
deeper, and deeper i go
minute, after minute goes by
oh! what a passionate cry
but deeper, and deeper i go
sometimes nice, and slow
i hear her
i feel her trembling below
deeper, and deeper i go
please, baby please is her new cry
never i scream
then i do
she falls on the floor with this submissive look
then she washes me with a warm cloth
whose __ is this she smiles
then places her lips on it
then i’m the one screaming, and moaning
we fall asleep in each others arms
i hope this was done tastefully
it was for her
all writing is copyrighted by the artist elite inc. 2008
experimentation
oh the sweet joy
Hala E, 7 months ago
very tastefully written…...what an awesome piece – pheeew!
Ushna Sardar, 7 months ago
awesome writing!
Skittlez, 7 months ago
I like this one. I like how deeper and deeper I go is throught the whole poem, very nice.
Skittlez, 7 months ago
through not throught, sorry…
stephfine, 7 months ago
wow! love your intimate wording…very personal stuff …mmmm makes you want some. :-)
stephfine, 7 months ago
You dont understand what?
stephfine, 7 months ago
You understand all… your feeling put into words is a gift that draws your readers in yearning for more and more…
lolowe, 7 months ago
Wow, this poem is highly erotic. Very sexy. I like it.
Naylor, 7 months ago
Erotic and passionate …. seductive and hungry are your words !!
SENSUAL SEDUCTION at its best :)
Again this is one I would like to hear read outloud
tinkster08, 7 months ago
I love this poem, it seems as though I am there without being there, I feel the depth you go and the passion, I feel the intensity put into this one, each of us have one person who we can put in that place… I love it!
Ash rebeltherace, 5 months ago
very erotic
well done
KEITH R. WILL..., 5 months ago
thanks ash glad u like it
greeneyedlady, 5 months ago
whew, I’ve gotta go splash some water on my face…....:-)))
KEITH R. WILL..., 5 months ago
hot stuff to keep u thinking & wet