THE TEMPTRESS
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a heart that beat at such a rapid pace
a body that couldn’t be replaced
a passionate touch
a warm embrace
which made me yearn for more
I dance in sheer delight
each, and every night
just to get a glimpse of her
her lips beyond compare
i refused to share
greed corrupted my foolish heart
mine all mine i said
jealousy lived in my head
i wanted to give her the world
diamonds and pearls
as she tempted
the very love from my soul
i lost control of ectasy
in just that brief minute
a moment of sanity
lust capture me
drive me into her arms like insanity
for I would truly be crazy
to give up love
Sally Omar
Beautiful…a def FAV!!!!!!! xooxoxox
KEITH R. WILL... replied
thanks Sally
jacqleen
wowwwwwwwwwwww…....this is HOT …..so Honest yet RAW….hmmm….only if people would let go of that word “MINE”....very cool writing ..loved it!!!
KEITH R. WILL... replied
thanks jacqleen much luv
Alison Pearce
Beautiful!!! Amazing artwork too!
KEITH R. WILL... replied
thanks 4 the luv
Marlo11
Oh this is gorgeous Keith. Such raw and passionate emotions just pour from your soul to the ‘paper’. Cheers. :)
KEITH R. WILL... replied
thanks 4 the compliment Marlo11
Cassey
drive me into her arms like insanity I love this line. Really like the poem and the art!
KEITH R. WILL... replied
thanks so much Cassey
Impassioned
Nice work Keith!
KEITH R. WILL... replied
much luv Mark
Tony Ryan
Interesting that you mention aesthetic beauty as part of the love. Whilst I beleive all people are beautiful in essence there is also a rare spiritual beauty in aesthetics especially when the woman has humility as it’s companion. Think that many men lose control and go to lust in the precence of beautiful looking women. However a humble woman is less likely to stimulate the man to lose control. For me the more I maintain control the sweeter the feeling of the woman.
KEITH R. WILL...
I understand completely