THE CHRISTMAS PRESENT

Author: KEITH R. WILLIAMS
Word Count: 139
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THE CHRISTMAS PRESENT

THE CHRISTMAS PRESENT belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, ABSTRACT DIGITAL ART AND WRITING, African-American Experience, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Angel Wings and Heaven, ART ACTION UNION - CREATIVE ACTIVISM, Core [C.O.R.E], Everyday Life, Light In The Darkness, Live, Love, Dream: , The Birds, The Sensual Word, The true beauty, United States, Up & Coming Writers, Vibrant and Vivid Color and WMG

She was as beautiful as a rose
a queen in her own world i suppose
every mans desire
was to have their heart set on fire
by this royal gift of love
never knowing what she was dreaming of
her eyes could pierce your soul
they made men lose control
her lips succulent, and rare
red as if rose petals belonged there
yearning to be kissed
this fantasy i could not resist
Oh! how i wished she was mine
there she stood captured in time
radiant, gorgeous as ever
yet no one was oh so clever
to say hello
i moved her heart so slow
romance became a trance
my heart danced
so glad i took the chance
the future revealed itself to me
the rest is history
underneath the christmas tree
no one unwrapped this present but me

neogolas

This is fat man keep it comming Keith,great use of concept.
KEITH R. WILL...

THANKS MERRY CHRISTMAS
crazyB

Now keith this is nice but still you have written love poems before try writing about getting revenge or writing about your mom and her struggle making it in the world of her time or look for someone on the street and make up a story about them as you watch them walk I ove to do that. Notice if they stand tall and proud or it they’re feet make it before their body meaning they slouch or do they;re bellies lead or is their head ducked in you’ll know what kind or person they are and they life they lead by that wak and assume thins by their dress I don’t know make up your own super hero I did she’s a serial killer going back and getting all the men who ever crossed me and its a great book and it’s cathartic you should read it…. Diary of a psychopath
KEITH R. WILL... replied

i hAVE A SERIAL KILLER STORY CALLED EBONY STALKINGS CHECK IT OUT
linaji

This is glorious work!!!
KEITH R. WILL... replied

merry christmas linaji
CloudChaser

In every way, beautiful. xx
KEITH R. WILL...

thanks cloudchaser
C J Lewis

Terrific writing Keith :)
KEITH R. WILL...

thanks so much cj