SOMETIMES I WANT TO TOUCH THE 3RD RAIL
JUST TO ESCAPE MY LIVING HELL
PEOPLE ALWAYS LOVING, BUT WATCHING ME DIE
NEVER DO THEY SEE ME CRY
SOMETIMES I WANT TO TOUCH THE 3RD RAIL
LET THE VOLTAGE RUN FREE
NO NORE PAIN
NO MORE MISERY
NO MORE EXPLAINING ME
SOMETIMES I WANT TO TOUCH THE 3RD RAIL
WRITE MY LAST GOODBYES
WALK AWAY FROM ALL THE LIES
BUT HELL IS NO PLACE FOR ME
GOD HAS A PLAN FOR ME
SO I SUFFER PATIENTLY
SOMETIMES I WANT TO TOUCH THE 3RD RAIL
Naylor, about 1 month ago
(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((HUG)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Please dig deep inside and hold on to the inner strength I know you have Keith….. I know its hard when times are hard and you feel you are at the end of your rope…... but I am tieing on an extention to that rope so you can’t give up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sally Omar, about 1 month ago
Keith, It is a sad, but beautiful flowing poem…I am sure it is just poetry and not your true feelings..
Your words always touch the soul….Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Naylor’s comment, about 1 month ago
i’m not giving up
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Sally Omar’s comment, about 1 month ago
thanks sally
Rielle, about 1 month ago
Kiss the sky instead! I felt the hope in this…
KEITH R. WILL..., about 1 month ago
thanks there’s always hope
IvyLeague, about 1 month ago
“I suffer patiently” nice line. That use to be me.
Nancy Chambers, about 1 month ago
WOW…intense. Never ever touch that 3rd rail!!!!!
My sister did (it’s in my writings) and my life and the lives of her children and grandchilren and our parents will never be the same.
Beautiful writing, and I love your art….you are very talented
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to IvyLeague’s comment, about 1 month ago
thanks ivy glad your suffering is over
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Nancy Chambers’s comment, about 1 month ago
thanks Nancyc i’ve been through suicide of a family member too! i’ll never touch the third rail
Devalyn Marshall, about 1 month ago
The use of the third rail was very creative. Yes ,God has plans for us all. Keith this was brilliantly written!! ;-)
KEITH R. WILL..., about 1 month ago
thanks beautiful
dakotagirl, about 1 month ago
Wow! Unbelievable piece….God does have a plan for you, keep believing in that while the rest of us keep believing in you. Sending big hugs your way. xoxo
KEITH R. WILL..., about 1 month ago
big hugs and kisses right back at ya