when drifting in the memories of time
illusions fly right by laughing, and shattered
like peices of glass lying on the ground
one wrong step pain will be found
seeping out slowly
like a deafening scream
in the middle of a peaceful dream
awakening the inner you
to visions unreal appearing true
like love, sucess, friends, and more
which seem to wander through a door
of discontent, and misery
life’s secret little enemies lurking
forever lingering, and working
for the destruction of your soul
leaving you to peice together reality
like your survival is a mere formality
where demons waiting will try to surface
under a veil of happiness, or sadness
pulling, and grabbing at your mind
peices falling one by one
shattered illusions
drifting
shifting
through the memories of time
weighing heavily on your mind
until you open up your eyes
realizing you’re no longer blind
amazing grace
how sweet the sound
i once was lost
but now i’m found
was blind, but now i see
SHATTERED ILLUSIONS
SELF REALIZATION
kevsphotos2008, 4 months ago
WOW….........This is just FANTASTIC,
Well done keith…....................................
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
thanks keysphotos2008 for the nice comment
Rielle, 4 months ago
Its a long long journey to find yourself, I love the way you wrote it
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
thanks Rielle it’s is a long journey
Care, 4 months ago
this is amazingly relative to me at this point in my life…and the way you express this….is ….(lost for word moment….can’t think of the right term)...but I love it : )
Digby, 4 months ago
Great piece Keith.
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
thanks so much digby
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Care’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks care i’m glad it touched you
carlotta peacock, 4 months ago
I love your mind hon, that is one masterfully written piece of work, an instant fav, xx
C J Lewis, 4 months ago
Wonderful expressive writing Keith :)
Kathleen Struckle, 4 months ago
Beautifully done Keith.
Ushna Sardar, 4 months ago
fantastic Keith!!!!
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
thanks ushna
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to carlotta peacock’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks carlotta i wish i could find a good one to love the rest lol
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to C J Lewis’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks CJ always a kind word
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Kathleen Struckle’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks kathleen how are you
Natella2020, 4 months ago
Beautiful work! I’ve heard “Amazing Grace” on TV, but, in your poem, it was your voice, proclaiming. Truly wonderful work.
carlotta peacock, 4 months ago
u will gorgeous xx
KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Natella2020’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks so much for the sweet comment
Alison Pearce, 4 months ago
Excellent piece Keith, your talent shines brightly
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
thanks Alison much love
flipteez, 4 months ago
I truly love the depth what a journey XXXXX
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
thanks missed u