SHE THOUGHT

IvyLeague, 4 months ago

Aww. I dig this piece.

~ Ari ~, 4 months ago

oh !

beautifully bitter sweet

then she leaned over, and kissed me
i asked what was that for?
just being you she replied

love that bit .. explains both characters perfectly ..

KEITH R. WILL... in reply to IvyLeague’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks ivy it just came to me

KEITH R. WILL... in reply to ~ Ari ~’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks ari i ‘m glad u like it

Alison Pearce, 4 months ago

Very well done!!

IvyLeague, 4 months ago

pretty good. . .i love the way i totally felt like i was a fly on the wall.

KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Alison Pearce’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks so much alison

deliriousgirl, 4 months ago

Totally fantastic, dear!!!!!! Heyyyyyy, I want some of those hearts!!!!!!!!!!

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

maybe you should read some more of mine it might just grab your heart

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

gif animation deliriousgirl

Jen Wahl, 4 months ago

how often it ends up like that…. very expressive. like your new avatar, btw.

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks jen i flash bob every now and then

Naylor, 4 months ago

WOW….you express yourself without thought in this piece Keith…
it hurts when you feel so much for someone …open yourself up and think that you have astablished a bond .. to only find that the person you thought knew you … didn’t…
I really am feeling this Keith and am impressed by your talent with words :)
Great work !

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks celena i like this one myself

RLHall, 4 months ago

Well written words that everyone can relate too, yet told in your own special style, very cool

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks RL it’s cool to hear from u

Kathleen Struckle, 4 months ago

Very well written Keith. We think we know the person we love and we find out it was not real. Bitter Sweet Memories. :)

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks again

Sally Omar, 4 months ago

Keith, Sad, so well written…Sally xxoo

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks sally

hiresholmes, 4 months ago

awwww…..passionate

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks sexy

ljmaxwell, 4 months ago

Very deep and honest.

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

THANK U

Shanina Conway, 4 months ago

Wonderful work Keith the line “then she thought…” is very telling.

Debbie King, 4 months ago

Good job :) I really like this.

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks u debbie

Mishaal Sardar, 4 months ago

well written Keith!

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks Mishaal nice to hear from u

KEITH R. WILL... in reply to Shanina Conway’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks shanina

Ushna Sardar, 4 months ago

awesome Keith!!!

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks ushna

Kanistha R. (O..., 4 months ago

fun and romantic. very nice couple, u two.

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

i wondering what u thought

ladyb, 4 months ago

Ow. This one hit home. Great poem. x

KEITH R. WILL... in reply to ladyb’s comment, 4 months ago

thanks ladyb

RossBrodie, 4 months ago

very cheesey and cliched – its like a gift card but with a bit more raunch. and a typical ending too. still, its direct and to the point i suppose

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

to each is own

Miri, 4 months ago

aw that’s a sweet but sad poem…i liked:
of course tongues went for weeks tangled in passion
bodies too!

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

thanks Miri of course they should

Shanna S., 3 months ago

Nice job… I really liked this, it weaved a nice story with a great message.

KEITH R. WILL..., 3 months ago

thanks so much it’s a pleasure

cooappie11, 3 months ago

aw thats so sad, i know how you feel, it really hurts to know your the only one who loves in a relationship

KEITH R. WILL..., 3 months ago

so true love is special