EYE OPENER

KEITH  R. WILLIAMS
Author: KEITH R. WILLIAMS
Word Count: 192
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i wake up in the morning
saying good morning god
thank you for everything
then listen to the birds sing
send out a few good mornings to all my friends
then the day begins
stretch the body
it’s getting old, and tight
thank you god for the rest last night
thinking about having some fun
seeing my son
listening to his mama talk smack
then they’ll send me on my way right back
to this crazy world i survive in
i’ll wonder when we’ll see each other again
catching up to them is like trying to catch Micheal Jordan
trying to stay out of trouble
but it’s almost summer
beautiful women everywhere, and i’m ready for one
wanna kiss under the summer sun
listen to sweet music
grab a fishing rod, and some beer
listen to my friends stories
you can’t believe what i hear
poetry slams, open mike rapping
hmmm lets just keep life happening
sending sweet love to those who need it
this is my eye opener for today
lord knows i need it

EYE OPENER

EYE OPENER belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, Everyday Life, The Word Tree, United States and Writers' Market
  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 2 months ago

    :) good morning

    I love how you drop by and say hello in the mornin

    good mornin
    who’s snorin
    not keith
    he’s goin explorin
    down to the beach
    check all the girls
    just out of reach
    don’t forget
    it’s a big world
    hot babe in a bikini
    she’s a cutie
    have you seen her
    don’t forget to take your paper
    grab your pen
    write it for later
    all the magic things
    you see
    todays a new day
    stay happy

    xx

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 2 months ago

    thanks ryan u stay happy too!

  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 2 months ago

    thanx hun

    xx

    (did ya like my lil rap? hahhaaaaaaaa)

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 2 months ago

    yeah it was tight

  • HarrietRN

    HarrietRN, 2 months ago

    Good morning Keith, and wishing a wonderful day for you :)

    Love what you have written, and when you first get up, heck it takes me a half a day to even start functioning O.O

  • TeriLee

    TeriLee, 2 months ago

    What a wonderful way to start off your day :)

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 2 months ago

    the beauty of life is realizing it’s sweet

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 2 months ago

    yes it is love is in the air let me grab some

  • Thomas Josiah Chappelle

    Thomas Josiah ..., 2 months ago

    thanks for the uplift, Keith

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 2 months ago

    thank you enjoy your day

  • RLHall

    RLHall, 2 months ago

    Well, Good Morning to you too :-)

    How nice your message made my day, and when I read your beautiful poem it only made it better! Thanks for both!

  • Lori Peters

    Lori Peters, 2 months ago

    Thank you, Keith, for the “Good Morning.” We so often forget that just a kind word or two can make a person’s day. I hope you have a good time with your son and that everyone will see that you need and deserve that.

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020, 2 months ago

    That’s very nice, eye-opener is right, and just when you opened your eyes.

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