Evidence of Children

Nicole Wells
Author: Nicole Wells
Word Count: 71
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Evidence of Children

Just a poem written after going out for a walk one day :)

I walk along the street
With my eyes searching the ground in front of me
And I see
Evidence of Children
A discarded Dinosaur
A purple foam letter H
A smiley face sticker, stuck onto the footpath
Treadmarks across its shiny yellow face
The street is quiet, nary a voice is heard
I never see them, on my sojourns into the world
Yet there it is…
The evidence of Children…

  • Damien Mason

    Damien Masoncommunity host

    Your poetry is just wonderful Nicole, I really love the style and your fantastic use of language, and I think this piece would be my favourite. Little wonders that most people ignore. Great work.

  • Nicole Wells

    Nicole Wells

    Thank you very much Damien, thank you also for the feature :)

  • Digby

    Digby

    Yes, great style. And a good eye.

  • Kmuzu

    Kmuzu

    I have a six year old. Believe me they exist. I like how your discovery is almost like an archaeologist or a paleontologist (discarded dinosaur). Nice work

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    I have kids. I’ve walked that route. Very nice work.

  • RuthFroehlinger

    RuthFroehlinger

    nice one! I like it.

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