Pick up Lines (Something I wrote when I was still very premature in this poetry thing)

Ma when I saw you I thought I was meeting my escort to heaven because only an angel could have such beauty
If I went blind today I’d be glad to say you were the last thing I saw
Why you look so sad well even with a frown on your face I can’t help but smile when I look at it
Aladdin a cartoon but give me a chance and we could fly higher than that magic carpet
You should work at a hospital because my sickness was cured when I saw you
If you ever sit up at night wondering why you can’t sleep or why your not happy as you should be the solution to that problem is me

Pick up Lines (Something I wrote when I was still very premature in this poetry thing) by 


Isn’t it about having fun well I was doing just that when I came up with this


Comments

  • Sarafeline
    Sarafelineover 5 years ago

    Nice entry will look forward to reading more :)..×.

  • Yea it’s pretty elementary but I figured why not post it

    – poeticgenius

  • Sarafeline
    Sarafelineover 5 years ago

    Well we all have these moments where we wonder, post or not to post ..Ha!.Words are meant to be read though so I’m glad you did :)..×.

  • very true some of em were pretty catchy

    – poeticgenius

  • Jascie Epinn
    Jascie Epinnover 5 years ago

    aww, it’s cute. not that it’s cute in a mediocre way but cute in a way that it’s really simple but it means a lot even without all the metaphores and irony and sarcasm, guten.

  • Yea the metaphors enhance it just that much more and as I said in the title I was very young minded when I wrote this

    – poeticgenius

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