Mom in Heaven Looking Down
If you’ve lost someone this is for you as well
Mom in Heaven Looking Down belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Boredom Competitions on the 24/7, The Word Tree and WMGMa it’s your baby boy again well grown man now
Been awhile since “Our Father” called you home but your here with me in spirit though
Got some stuff to get off my chest so I can have a clear mind again
The past few years I’ve learned so much so fast I don’t think I kept up with it all
Making moves here and there not knowing if it’s the right one until something goes wrong
When that occurs a lessons learned and I don’t retrace my steps
Lil sis is coming into her own for the most part I help when I’m able
The bad decisions I make on a daily put a damper on that
Then I’m left pitying myself because big brother not the Ultimate Protector he proclaimed himself to be
This depressed state does’nt go on for long because if my head is out the game to long my days gon be numbered in more ways than one
Just want you to know my heart is geniunly angelic but living in this dirty flesh has corrupted it
One day I pray to find the right way because if my day of reckoning comes and I’m hellbound we’ll never meet again
H M Bascom
I think she heard you. :-)
poeticgenius
thank u ma those words there meant more than you know
Ming Myaskovsky
Her love and prayers stays with you, always!!! Best Regards :)))))))))))) Ming
poeticgenius
thanks Ming
Jascie Epinn
I love how you believe in spirits, as I do. It’s amazing how you can’t see someone but you know they’re there.
buzzy
Your prayers are powerful and sure she loves you.
poeticgenius
thanks I appreciate your comments on this one because it was so dear to my heart and I felt posting it would let someone else who had such a great lost find some closure
Astoreth
indeed you have. thanks.
Elenne Boothe
Wow!! ever so beautiful. She is your Angel watching over you.
Your writing has touch my heart and has reminded me
that my mom to is my angel. When we pray and believe and trust are creater, our feet will begin on the right path. Our mother’s love and heart is forever with us, In there eyes we can’t do no wrong. You are a strong man my brother. Hugs : )
poeticgenius
yea as I said it was for me as well as anyone who suffered a lose of that caliber help them find some closure as well
Maggie Bartkowiak
This is indescribably beautiful. I can’t empathize, but I definitely got what you must have been feeling when you wrote this.
SilverQueen
... she knows… she watches…. she holds your heart for safe-keeping x
ShadowDancer
very touching PG, and congrats on your feature.
poeticgenius
I appreciate the kind words from all of u on this one which meant so much to me
rayy
this is beautiful. brutally honest and raw. really really good job, hun.
poeticgenius
thanks ma I appreciate you taking the time to read it