My Planet on TV

poeticgenius
Author: poeticgenius
Word Count: 216
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My Planet on TV

It’s true and I hope it opens people’s eyes when they take our freedoms and lifestyles for granted

My Planet on TV belongs to the following groups:

All Out Emotion and WMG

As I sit on top of it staring off into space my video feeds never been better
I flip through the channels China, Iraq, Nigeria I see it all
Tourist stare in awe as they view the Great Wall for the first time
A few miles away a man poverty stricken puts in work in a rice field
Kids who don’t even know the value of a dollar prespire in sweat shops
Bombs bursting, shots wizzing pasts heads the wars on
In school they’re being taught to hate Americans
Women with their faces covered only eyes in view, over time they’ve come to know their place below the man
It’s hot as Heites and the grass is high as a five year old the hunter becomes the hunted
In the stream we see do you believe they bathe here
Kids walk bare foot on disease filled streets
Let’s tune in good ole U.S. of A feigns shooting up in an alley
They not higher than the chick on 5 ex pills in the party though
She’s walking home from work he’s horny she looks easy he takes what she has and gives her a disease she can’t get rid of I can’t bare to see anymore

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    dude i forgot how crazy retardly insane this is
    truly nice
    i love this
    i can’t bare to see anymore either son thats why i’m off in my own world
    and only come back for food and sex with that locals
    YA DIGG!!

  • Flames

    Flames

    yo you brought honor to your family..lol no joking though I just realized it but anyway keep it real my nigga nice style and flow

  • lolowe

    lolowe

    This is really powerful. The reality in your writing is really shocking but you do a great job of it.

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    thanks to all and I just felt that since everyone else was speaking on how they felt about everyday occurences I’d give it a try and this is the product of that

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    sad, desolate piece of the truth we are shown every day.

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    that’s why it meant so much to me to write because this is our bitter sweet reality, sucks that is but I’m just a messenger

  • Jascie Epinn

    Jascie Epinn

    A true person that doesn’t step back from the truth. I feel a bit hurt, depressed if anything. This really decodes the mystery of life for exactly what it is, yet so many still live under the shroud that nothing could never happen to them. I guess since you serve, you have a far better view than many others, which I can respect you for. Well done.

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    thanks ma and the world we live in is heartless at times I’ve learned to deal with it though for the most part anyway

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