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Deep Thoughts

A mind is a terrible thing to waste and I know this
So I make good use of mine
It’s become strong over the years
And hungry ready to devour some knowledge whenever
Clever, quick I think on my toes as the saying goes
Yes even the times when I’m staring into the abyss and it seems I’ll accomplish nothing
Trust there’s something and your comments will be nonexistent
Speechless like your voicebox clocked out on a break
I wonder how the world would be if it was me hung from the cross instead of he
I retract that statement
But it was made in an effort to show people would belittle Jesus to swipe they Visa’s
Somewhere along the line sight was lost of what’s wrong and what’s right
No one can tell the difference, light a spiff power up before you go
Drink until you can’t think mentally extinct
Writing this because my thoughts make a difference to someone
Even if it’s just one atleast someone felt it
Hot topics get melted like ice in the Sahara
Outside the box where I’m placed it’s definite
Doing the indefinite what you thought was impossible
I’ve possibly done it atleast twice
The only way I could be more specific
If my name was Pacific what an S in front
Think about it

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Comments

  • colorblind
    colorblindalmost 6 years ago

    Think about it
    nice lines man
    i don’t know why the public isn’t shooting at this one
    but i know one thing
    POETIC JUSTICE
    is the new….lol

  • jianina
    jianinaalmost 6 years ago

    There is always something on the mind, if you can sculpt it
    because a thought gone to waist would be tasteless.
    That clever line suits you…you have a balanced outlook and flow with what you portary in your work. You pick on the literal like its not serious enough.
    Like sending the right message across comes intuitive. It is hard to ride that line between being explict and neutral. A way to talk to the world with what you want to say. You are doing big on your writings and seem like you are confident in what your saying> i look forward to reading pieces like this that go even deeper>Much respect Nina>0:)

  • poeticgenius
    poeticgeniusalmost 6 years ago

    I love your comments let me say that first. Yes my confidence level may cause some to call me cocky but that’s not the case. As far as going deeper that’s just the tip of the iceberg ma.

  • EnlightenedOne
    EnlightenedOneover 5 years ago

    Not bad at all.

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