"Love" a repost
a part of a book me and colorblind about to have out
so let me know what you think!!!
"Love" a repost belongs to the following groups:
"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Boredom Competitions on the 24/7, Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom to Shine, Lifeline, The Word Tree and WMG“Love”
By: Randy Morgan
Let me prove love is true
Give you happiness and pain thats what love a do
Ups and downs, but when you come up from down
Then you know something there that’s why you stuck around
If it’s meant to be then it’s gonna last
No matter what obstacles it has to pass
Like a seed that you plant in the ground it will grow
Can’t hide full bloom it will show
Open doors like a knob, it can take you places
If the foundation is strong it can make you places
When you’re awake it’s the only thing you think about
When you’re asleep it’s the only thing you dream about
They base movies on it the stuff is famous
Take you from drugman to family man the stuff can tame us
Make you do things you never did with no regret
Hurt you worse than death in the fam you so upset
Could be the best and the worst at the same time
Connection with another as if sharing the same mind
Fill that void that you use to have inside
No more you just one because they’re half your side
It’s real but you won’t know until you feel
When you do, then you’ll know that its real
margpie
wonderful, i was singing it in my head to a great beat, FAB work, love “Fill that void that you use to have inside” ...excellent :)
Ariel Jackson
“Open doors like a knob, it can take you places
If the foundation is strong it can make you places”
I like this. It’s so true. I like how you use words and bring about different meanings concerning one word.
Damien Venditti
very well written mate … you and CB you stick to your guns, i wanna see this book : ))
jianina
You just took what many speak about to a whole other level>>foundation makes places!!!! like seriously>>>that is what is really up! that one line right there, just blew common out the water!>>
Much respect>>Nina 0:)
Verneda
Powerful piece! Keep up the great work!!
Jascie Epinn
someone is apparently very in love and it’s quite easy to tell, that makes 3 of us. Love the poem, keep up the fire lil babes
poeticgenius replied
Yes this was actually given birth by first love thus making it more pure than any other in my eyes