In the flow

Plum
Author: Plum
Word Count: 203
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In the flow

Sometimes things just flow and something wonderful and new is experienced …

In the flow belongs to the following groups:

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The air
Filled with the secrets of evening-scent
Danced on our skin

Touched by this playful magic
Starry shadows illuminating the path
We walked as if the moment would never end
As if all the living of our lives had brought us to now

Cupped in the hands of a haunting melody
Too beautiful to turn from
Too musical to leave a note unsounded
We surrendered into a moonlit bay

And did we become as water
Filling in the spaces with awakening ripples deep within
Moving across each other like currents in an ocean

The wings of a bat silhouetted the night-sky
Adding to the air an omen
The hoot of an owl, the rustling of branches
What moves in this grove of mystery
What blending of gods and nature

For we sought and found in each other a source
Though the thirst remains for what lives in mystery
As Venus smiles knowingly
And Saturn-stern returns to his books

And so we live beautifully haunted yet jacketed by thought
Awaiting the moment of transformation into water
Where all that we are … flows

Simply flows
The rising swells and receding tides knowing no beginning or end

Just flow

In the flow

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    whoaaaaa
    i totally got caught up in the flow of THIS
    beautiful wordscape you painted
    great work

  • Plum replied

    Thank you so much Shoaib, so glad you enjoyed >:

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Plum, these words are pure magic. x

  • Plum replied

    Thank you so much Erika >:

  • Mikyle

    Mikyle

    Utterly magical…

    Just flow

    In the flow

    This poem is so full of rich images and feeling that you can do nothing but flow with it and through it. What a beautiful way to start my day… Thank you. x

  • Plum replied

    thank you for your lovely comments Mikyle … hope you flow through the day >:

  • GingerRose

    GingerRose

    Awesome girlfriend!!

  • Plum replied

    Thanks GingerRose. Nice to have you visit >:

  • Melissa Brett

    Melissa Brett

    Beautiful, magical, transporting. Love this!

  • Plum replied

    Thanks Melissa, so glad you enjoyed >:

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