Mermaid Remembering
This poem is a wish to listen to intuition more ….
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Freedom In Words & Art, THE DIVINE FEMININE, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming WritersI call from within
Where a deeper memory lives
Where once you swam like a mermaid
In a deep blue sea
Where seashells played in your hair
And underwater melodies sang to your heart
Where you read the currents of the ocean
As a natural intelligence
For now I see how you often forget
No longer trusting in the waves of your intuition
How schools of fishes sometimes pass you by
And you do not see
So I call from afar, an ocean lament
I seep into you as only water can
I gush through your hair and trickle over your skin
I awaken the mermaid tail of mystery you walked away from
And so I set you free into the depths
That you might join with your lost half
That you might swim with dolphins and sing with whales
That you might be one with the tides that wax and wane
Imparting wisdom’s kiss through the rhythms of the ocean
And so when you return to land may you remember
May you still know the powerful kiss of the sea
The smell of salt, the sound of the waves, your friends the fishes
And then may you flow … simply flow
Water singing through your hair and drenching your skin
Awakening lost senses into realization
Your mermaid tail merging into your steps on the land
Melissa Brett
Amazing imagery! Love this – such a gentle reminder to us all… thank you.
Plum replied
Thank you Melissa >:
Carol Berliner
How beeeeeautiful is this!!! Brilliant work Plum!! I loooove it !! Instant fav!
Plum replied
Thanks so much Carol, so glad you liked it >:
Emma Wertheim
I love this…..beautiful….beautiful work…plum…made my heart sing…
Plum replied
Thanks so much Emma >:
RubyMae
Ahh… I have been away for a while, slowly trying to catch up and this is the first poem I have read since I got back. This is such an exquisite poem. Yes! A gentle reminder beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this, Plum :)
Plum replied
Thanks RubyMae, what a lovely response. Hope you’ve had a good time away >:
Mikyle
Oh Plum. This is absolutely magical. I love it!
Magnificent piece… x
Plum replied
So glad you liked it Mikyle and thank you for the favourite >:
Rex Inkpen
what a beautiful prayer plum… i love the flow of your work (and your predilection for the sea)
Plum replied
Thank you for your comment Rex – so interesting you called it a prayer as I didnt think of it like that when I wrote it but that is what it actually felt like >:
Stephen Denham
wow love the “getting-back-in-touchness” of this lullaby!
Plum replied
thanks Steve >:
Erika .
What a dream to read this…..I just swam through this Plum. xx
Plum replied
that makes me smile – I always love a swim in the ocean. thank you >:
JasmineLove
Absolutely flowing….absolutely beautiful!!! xo
Plum replied
so glad you flowed along with it, thank you >:
happyfeet5
This is a fantiastic poem, full of fantasy. I bet everyone who loves the sea identifies with this one. I’m sure you are half a mermaid who once long ago left the sea and yearn to go back.
Plum replied
You know I feel a bit like I was a mermaid – often wish I had a tail. Thank you so much for your lovely comment >: