A boundless sea

Author: Plum
Word Count: 124
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A boundless sea

This was written in honour of space and its welcome touch in a busy world

A boundless sea belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Freedom In Words & Art, Spiritual Art, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming Writers

Bathing in space
Simple space

Feeling its balm-like touch
As is radiated gentle healing

Space
Simple space

A tonic to stress
A sharing of peace

A breaking of the tide
That holds me in its grip
That robs the moment of its living

Space
Simple space

Expansive and gently alive
Filled with the wonder of hidden treasure
A sensing that awakens slumbering beauty

Here is much to be discovered
As in the vastness of creations gaze
Lie the eyes of another world

Here may connections spark into living
Like stars smiling across the night-sky

Everyday living transformed
As new colours touch the edges

Space
Simple space

A place where you can widen and deepen
As you become weightless in a boundless sea

RuthFroehlinger

Plum, this is beautiful. Really wondrous words.
Plum replied

Thank you Ruth >:
Stephen Denham

this carries you away into other dimensions…beautiful words
Plum replied

Thanks so much >:
Mikyle

Plum, this is so beautiful. I love your concept of space as relief from a busy, crazy world.
Life and the universe naturally balance themselves out.
So, simply… beautifully written.
Plum replied

gosh, thanks Mikyle. Love what you have said about life and the universe naturally balancing themselves out – i really believe that, just have to be open to it >:
Melissa Brett

Ahhhhh… thanks Plum! I so needed to read this. Feel like I’ve been lost in the world of crazy thought and stress – this is a brilliant reminder to come back to what gives life – thanks again!
Plum replied

I so know what you’re talking about Melissa – crazy thought and stress!! Its an awesome force …. such a relief to feel some space in the midst of it all x
Emma Wertheim

.....So beautiful Plum….this poem lifted me up out of busy thought and dropped me off in a much quieter place which I hope to remain in a little longer….THANK YOU!!! x
Plum replied

Thanks so much Emma, this is a lovey comment. So glad you were able to feel some space!! >: x
Carol Berliner

PERFECT PLUM!!
Plum replied

Thank you Carol >: x
Erika .

Here may connections spark into living
Like stars smiling across the night-sky_......mmm..love this. Your poetry is like music, dear Plum. x
Plum replied

You are very generous Erika especially in the light of your own poetry. Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed xx
happyfeet5

Love this one. Yes every one needs his space to be released of stress and I love the way the little girl is enjoying hers and welcoming with open hands.
Plum replied

Thank you >: