Play me a new note
This poem came from thinking about history and how it does often repeat and how we can make a difference, even if its through what we think, what lives in our hearts …
Play me a new note belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Freedom In Words & Art, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Something To Say and Up & Coming WritersHistory sighs as it sees it reflection
Saddened by events that keep it on replay
Shedding a tear
For suffering come from greed
For actions based on fear
It lifts its head toward the ocean, looking deeply into its wisdom
Healing waves wash over and over
Bringing a cleansing
A clearing of debt
A moment of space
History takes a new breath and the air is freshened
And begins to sing to the great orchestrator – humankind
A gentle lullaby of appeal
Play me a new note
Live me a new story to tell
For each person counts in the sound they make
All are instrumental in shaping the future
The lullaby filled the air
And to this day is played in the atmosphere
You can feel it as a wish -
A wish that speaks to a global need
A wish that comes from the heart of earth
And so day by day as history is created
Does the wind carry the wish around the world and beyond
Through the stars and around the moon
Back again into the galaxy of your heart
Where you create
Where we all create …
Carol Berliner
Wooooooooow woooooooooow woooooooooow Plum! Such powerful work!! Wonderful writing as always!! The message you portray rings true & cIear!!! I firmly believe we can all make a difference!!I instant fav!!
Plum replied
Thank you so much for your feelings on this Carol and for favouriting xxx
RubyMae
I love this, Plum.
An instant fave…
Plum replied
So glad you liked this RubyMae and wow thanks for favourting >:
Emma Wertheim
Plum…this is magnificent…thank you x
Plum replied
Dear Emma, thank you so much x
Erika .
WOW Plum this is masterfully written. I love how you have written about history and people and their wish for a better world…...this is a masterpiece in my eyes!! I love it!!! Instant favorite! XX
Plum replied
Thanks so much for your warm feedback and for favouriting Erika. It just struck how much that wish for a better world is growing right now even though we still face so much of history repeating itself. Something has to change within i think. thanks again x
Astoreth
Nice one Plum. xx
Plum replied
thanks so much Astoreth and for favouriting xx
RuthFroehlinger
Beautiful words well written!
Plum replied
Thank you so much Ruth >:
Stephen Denham
beautifully written with a feeling that wells up and overflows…well done plum!
Plum replied
thanks Steve – i felt it welling up even before the words came x