Bewitched

Holly Ringland
Author: Holly Ringland
Word Count: 147
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Bewitched

The Queens of Skippytrop.

She’s that person, your person, who does more to your heart than you can ever actually say.

she swims in the streams and channels of my heart

Bewitched belongs to the following groups:

Flash Fiction, Graphic Scratch and WMG

She picks boughs of magnolia from the tree in her garden and brings them to me in her fist as though she’s bringing me blooms of her heart to plant as my own.

She takes a day off work, treats herself to a drive in the country and leaves 50’s starlet fiction and bites of toffee treacle honey sugar on my doorstep before ringing the bell and skipping away.

She reads the language of my face.

She paints the clouds with a thousand different reminders, then captures them in a butterfly net and pins them to my wall.

She’s the ink and words from a Golden Book come to life.

She plays the Mad Hatter so I can play Alice.

She knows about the hidden debris, the mess, the harrowed whispers you don’t ever say out loud.

And she loves me anyway.


copyright © 2008, Holly Ringland.

  • Mardra

    Mardra

    I like the flow of this. I had to whisper it to my self on a second read to listen to it’s movement. Thank you for sharing this.

  • Holly Ringland replied

    that’s so beautiful.
    thank you for reading.

  • fillette

    fillette

    It’s like a warm spring breeze moving through a willow tree. Your writing is a pleasure to read.

  • Holly Ringland replied

    goodness me fillette, thank you so much.

  • mstrace

    mstrace

    I absolutely LAH-HOV this! It gave me goosepimplies. evocative, yet sweet and tart…just like my favorite dessert! beautifully done.

  • Holly Ringland replied

    HULL-O LUV-LEE!

    This means the world to me, thanks trace xx

  • anya

    anya

    yum

  • Holly Ringland replied

    delish :) thanks anya.

  • Vladimir Garcia flores

    Vladimir Garci...

    Shit it so gives an exuding aura of complete enjoyment!.

  • Holly Ringland replied

    thanks for reading vladimir

  • Bloodnok

    Bloodnok

    This is a truly lovely piece of writing—enough to make this old fellow’s eyes dewey!

  • Holly Ringland replied

    oh, aren’t you lovely. thank you.

  • VelvetGirl

    VelvetGirl

    and Bedazzled! Enchanting!

  • Holly Ringland replied

    beautiful words… bedazzled and enchanting… so pleased my work summoned them in your mind. thank you madam v :)

  • lianne

    lianne

    “blooms of her heart to plant as my own” – what a superbly beautiful line, how tender and poignant this is. And how perfectly right and wonderful to love and be loved by a faerie spirit like this! What awe in that discovery and what joy in that realization. So beautiful as always Holly.

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