My clothes fall from me, unneeded
Slowly I lose the house my money built
Careers and dreams blow off as dust
Hope and fear, two sides of the same coin,
Are recognised and discarded
Family, friends are shrugged off also
And self itself is understood and forgotten
I, not I, at last may watch without distraction.
Morning Prayer
A short prayer before meditation as I try to gain perspective
photos40, 7 months ago
Very moving piece. Very well written.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Del Millar, 7 months ago
just Be
as God desires you to Be
happy thoughts
KEITH R. WILL..., 7 months ago
it feels like your happy
butchart, 7 months ago
beautifully written…. welcome to the universe….. and hopefully a new beginning….................peace and light…....b
Sally Omar, 7 months ago
Excellent … Sally xxoo
Helene Kippert, 7 months ago
Profound and beautiful
Daniel Rayfield
,
7 months ago
We can all take time off Can we not?
Silvia Manuela, 7 months ago
Precise and makes one go “hmmm”.
Anne van Alkemade
,
7 months ago
The road to objectivity. Martin, if only I could find it so easy. Nicely put. :o)
binjy, 7 months ago
Were it was so easy …........ nice!
Pilgrim
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7 months ago
Thank you all for your lovely words. It reminds me about why this site exists and why it is all worthwhile. Love you all.
G. Merrick Jus..., 7 months ago
As usual the beauty and earnest nature of your soul shines through. Reminds me slightly of a work I once wrote “I Baptized Myself Today” detailing poetically how I cleansed myself of those sins, weights, worries, and materials I felt upon my body each day – I must say however that the way you have written the similar sentiment is more pointed and easier use in showing people a new way to be free, or at least that it is possible for us all to become weightless and floating, should only be found our own personal methods. When you give my friend, you give unilaterally and plentifully.
Getch, 7 months ago
I like this alot. Very much enjoyed. Has a great deal of feeling.
As always, good work! :)
Linda Ridpath, 7 months ago
A beautifully described ‘letting go’... well done
bellmusker, 7 months ago
This blessed state is not simple to achieve, but oh so rewarding when we do. Beautifully described.
9TyLeRAuStIN9, 6 months ago
flawlessly put
SuliHawk, 6 months ago
Well stated. Now you are ready to fly. I like the way you pared it all down to simplicity.
Hala E, 6 months ago
beautifully written….
cgodfrey, 6 months ago
it is very cool
vanesse, 6 months ago
I felt chills as I read this piece.. Quite lovely!
Jing3011, 6 months ago
Strong!
deliriousgirl, 6 months ago
As I grow older and older with each glance in the freekin mirror, I’ve found that each year, hell, each day, I am jettisoning overboard more and more extraneous bullshit. My hope is that I’ll eventually get to the real authentic core of me eventually, and yes, I am enjoying the ride also.
Many thanks and may the force be with you!