I Measure My Life

Pilgrim
Author: Pilgrimworks here
Word Count: 131
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I Measure My Life

A poem about the move to serenity.

I Measure My Life belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

I measure my life by the days on the calendar
I measure my life by the years since 1960
I measure my life by the esteem of my colleagues
By the wealth which I hold
By the love of my children
By the size of my waist
by the years since the last cigarette
by the turns of my bicycle wheel
by the acres of my farm
… the calories I do not eat
… the meditations in the morning
… the rise and fall of the stock market
… members at redbubble
… Christmas cards I receive
… emails in the day
I measure my life …
I measure my life …
One day god will take away the measuring stick
Or I will simply forget where I put it

  • Xavier Russo

    Xavier Russo

    Indeed, the many different ways life can be measured. Some standard, others not, but all part of our mortal journey.

    Your entry reminds me of what someone wise once said: i.e. “not everything that can be counted, counts; and not everything that counts can be counted”.

  • kathleen

    kathleen

    I try not to measure, except by the hours I’m at leisure – /
    Any other perspctive, to me can only be relative.

  • Jason Ross

    Jason Ross

    That’s pretty cool.

  • Elaine van Dyk

    Elaine van Dyk

    Lovely way of evaluating one’s life.

  • akustikstudio

    akustikstudio

    thank you for all your lovely comments on my work Pilgrim, muchly appreciated. It’s comments like these that keep me going. Loving your journals too, keep up the good work. Peace, akustikstudio

  • akustikstudio

    akustikstudio

    it’s funny, i was thinking yesterday [as i transferred years of work and labelling them on my external hard drive] that life too could be measured by gigabytes?
    there’s also a movie i saw much younger [and unfortunately i don’t remember the name], that the charcter’s, when born, were given a certain amount of life, say 500 years, and every transaction they made, like buying groceries, was measured in time. So for example, a bag of apples cost you 4 hours of your own life.
    an interesting line of thought don’t you think?

  • Pilgrim

    Pilgrimworks here

    Thank you for your comments. I know I spend too much time measuring. Slowly as I meditate i begin even to lose track of time. And when all is said and done nothing will be measured. Finding that state in the here and now is very hard.

  • Norma Chalmers

    Norma Chalmers

    A good read, thankyou. I once heard it said that time spent fishing is not counted in ones life expectancy.
    Has it occurred to you, creators of RedBubble, that you may have created something vastly more than you envisaged? An outcome unexpected? I get a sence, unclear yet as to what it is about, that I have entered a dimension where there is this warm and vibrant contact. I like its silence, too, but that does not mean I can’t hear you and our RB colleagues.

    I realise that I have said in my few comments, so far, things I have not said before and are just right for me to express through this smeeting place.

    This 4th dimension may not sell prints for $’s, but it sure as hell is precious.

  • Pilgrim

    Pilgrimworks here

    Norma, you touch me (and us) truely deeply touch me.

  • Helene Kippert

    Helene Kippert

    A very interesting thread – and you are so right about the importance of finding the timeless in time.

  • Amanda Cole

    Amanda Cole

    This is really nice, i got goosebumps!

  • LittleHelen

    LittleHelen

    Wow….are you some writer! Cool username too ;)

  • Dani Di Cesare

    Dani Di Cesare

    That’s so true (that we are constantly measuring)
    I enjoy your writing..
    It has gotten me thinking about my life.. and now I can’t go to sleep ! :)

  • Jessica  Tremp

    Jessica Tremp

    wonderful sentiments here…we are all too guilty of this

  • Ozcloggie

    Ozcloggie

    Great prspective. Nice way of sorting out life.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    You amount to a wonderful person to us RB people – liked this!

  • Jan Piller

    Jan Piller

    hmmm.. makes me think of all the things I measure my life by and you’re right… it’s just a stick…. well there’s one more thing to add to your list… that you made one more person think…. that’s a good thing. thanks for that.

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