The Boat

Pilgrim
Author: Pilgrimworks here
Word Count: 58
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The Boat

With a wonderful image from EnjoyLife that seems to illustrate the feeling.

I am a boat on the ocean
Or even just a sailor on the boat
Sometimes joyous and singing of the sea
Sometimes hanging over the side
Wishing for death

And then in my illness and misery
For the briefest of moments
I learn, no more – remember -
I am also the sea itself
Endlessly at peace with itself

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar

    going with the flow …
    beautiful writing and image
    and moment to be in..

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman

    Wonderful Pilgrim…and thanks for the gentle reminder…

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    Lovely insight ;)

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    here’s a pretty song for you
    Boats and Birds#

  • Pilgrimworks here replied

    Karin
    Yes, it is pretty and when not seen as a love song is actually quite profound. There is a notion in Buddhism of the underlying truth being the emptiness, stillness and silence.

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    ps…the ending is weird….so just ignore that bit :)
    beautiful poetry pilgrim:)

  • Polly Peacock

    Polly Peacock

    Awesome! There is so much truth in that – we are all a part of the Universe and it is when we become one with the Universe, we excel!! Great poem!!

  • littleime

    littleime

    The longing for death – I understand – but all I get from stillness is well – more stillness all I get from silence is silence – no peace

  • Timmie

    Timmie

    I am kristine Nora .. please look an see i am only me and someone has shut me down ..,,it is not right… thank you for you help : ] k

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