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Fogging the Glasses

I bend fixing a trough. The horses gather around a little bit thirsty and curious. Its cold and I can feel them close. A young, brave colt nudges up close, fogging my glasses. Making the work difficult. I push at hm – not annoyed. I return to the task. They jostle about, strange and engaging.

Later that night we find one of the horses, Harry, has come down with colic. He is a big, bold adolescent. Beautiful and scared with pain. My wife takes him to the vet hospital late last night.

He is there now, almost certainly going to die. I am willing the universe to a different outcome.

  • robpixaday

    robpixaday

    (((((((((((((((((hugs for you all)))))))))))))))))))

  • Pilgrimworks here replied

    Thank you, it is very sad. We need a little miracle now.

  • Mel Brackstone

    Mel Brackstone

    Oh no :(((

  • Shanina Conway

    Shanina Conway

    Oh…this is heartwrenching Martin…I’m so sad for you all and hope he recovers…hugs

  • Juilee  Pryor

    Juilee Pryor

    that is a life in a tiny little and beautifully written personal view…. you write in a way that lets me be there at the trough with those beautiful horses in the crisp cold air….. but….. but Martin sweetie…. we can will all we like….. the universe has it’s own particular endpoint…. and making us happy is maybe not one of it’s most salient points….. I hope the horse lives…. but if death is due a call at yours….. who would you hold out to it’s embrace..?..... it’s not ours to make that call…. if Harry lives then it is as god wills…. and if not be calm and relieved it’s not you or your wife or children…... miracles exist but sometimes they come wrapped in rags….. look beyond the potential loss of this lovely young horse and know how blessed you are…..

  • Pilgrimworks here replied

    Juilee, thank you

  • PERUGINA

    PERUGINA

    Martin.. i know something of your anguish.. i will hold your beautiful colt in my thoughts and pray for that Miracle.
    (((hugs)))

  • Tiffany Dryburgh

    Tiffany Dryburgh

    Oh god, I am so sorry… I am willing the universe with you.

  • Del Millar

    Del Millar

    A beautiful piece of writing Pilgrim – you paint a great picture of a
    scene in your working life; the parting lines are very sad – and I pray
    for miracles containing humane outcomes in the least, and at best, good news.
    My thoughts etc …

  • Pilgrimworks here replied

    Del, thank you for your wishes. As Juilee says the universe will take its course and we are witnesses. He is sort of hanging on. We hope.

  • georgiegirl

    georgiegirl

    Your poor family… everyone must be so sad. I hope he gets better but at least he knows he is a much loved horse. Take care and be strong. It might be his time to become an Angel. xxx

  • Robyn Lakeman

    Robyn Lakeman

    I’m so sorry to hear this Martin, thinking of you all and hoping for a miracle. They sometimes do happen xox

  • adgray

    adgray

    If I could I would take your pain
    and let it wash away in the rain
    Secretly I’d hold him, will him well
    then make him promise to never tell
    and should all my hopes and wishes fail
    may I hold your hand while you tell the tale
    of how he came to be in strife
    and of your love for his great life

    Martin I hope he is well now!
    You are in my thoughts!
    Chookas! xX♥☼♥Xx

  • Pilgrimworks here replied

    Thank you so much for your lovely poem and support.

  • webbie

    webbie

    So sorry It had to lose a pet (friend) even though we know God has a special place for them..we are human and miss our animal friends…

  • webbie

    webbie

    had=hard

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