life...time frame

picketty
Author: picketty
Word Count: 16
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life...time frame

conceived
gestating
born
burping, teething
growing, maturing,
mating, reproducing
advancing declining
diseasing disputing
declining
deceasing
gone

  • Roscoe Davis III

    Roscoe Davis III

    True. great poem. one question though. Why is the safe filter on?

  • picketty

    picketty

    huh i never put it on

  • Jim Caldwell

    Jim Caldwell

    In brief, good

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    That’s right Picketty.

  • lianne

    lianne

    Great work – but I have to ask like Roscoe – certainly no need for a safe filter here – and I’d remove it if you can. That’s ridiculous of someone to censor this lovely work!

  • picketty replied

    filter off,never realised it was on

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death and life