Waiting Patiently

Jo O'Brien
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Waiting Patiently

Waiting Patiently belongs to the following groups:

Melbourne & Victoria

I learned some time ago to wait my turn. That there are other things in people’s lives more important than me. It’s easy to feel like you are being helpful when you know that by stepping aside, you are allowing someone else to get on with it. Someone faster than you. I learned to make my point quickly and fight viciously against the clock. I learned to ask for what I wanted straight away or miss out. When I sit down to dinner, I eat the best bits first. There is only so much time left in life and who am I to decide how frequently, or infrequently time should be allocated to me? Why should I demand so much time of a person? So here I am, waiting patiently. Letting everyone else run around me living their lives. I can keep myself busy while I wait. Busy personifies so much of who I am these days. It is like cells, dividing and dying. Always rushing to a simple end and yet no further than when the process began. I learned that being visited at eight o’clock might actually mean 9 o’clock. And that the hour in between these two events is treading water. I can be busy for that hour. I can convince myself that I’m glad I had some extra time to do all those things I kept meaning to do. But after my hour of busying I am still at home, waiting to leave. And my time means nothing. But I wait patiently.

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Jo – this is incredibly true for most. There is a fine line between being patient and feeling disappointed….

  • Peter Davidson

    Peter Davidson

    wonderfully evocative glimpse of aging and the invisibility of old age.

  • Michelle Hogan

    Michelle Hogan

    Yes Jo, I try and do this also. I’m 38 and find that with each year I gain a whole lot of patience, its the best part about getting older. There are so many other things in life that are far more serious than worrying about the little things : ) . Good on you!

  • John Robb

    John Robb

    Beautifully written Jo.

  • Scott Ruhs

    Scott Ruhs

    An amazing piece of writing here, Jo. You hit the nail on the head, and it was waiting patiently for the impact. You certainly provided that here. Wonderful, wonderful work!!

  • roybarry

    roybarry

    Jo, this is quite, quite Brilliant, I love it.!

    Mind you, I get really pissed when people turn up late or keep me waiting, patient, I ain’t!

  • Boadicea

    Boadicea

    The duality of it is masterful. Patience and impatience. Talk about passive aggressive. Describes my emotions perfectly when on hold for two hours waiting to speak to a damm phone company

  • aeris

    aeris

    Very nice Jo. I empathise with this a lot.

  • Holly Werner

    Holly Werner

    Very well done and very true. Most of my life feels like waiting.

  • soos

    soos

    This is great writing :)

  • MarkezzAckui ...

    MarkezzAckui ...

    the hands of time….interesting writing

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