What Are We?

PhotoFox
Author: PhotoFox
Word Count: 170
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What Are We?

I wrote this when I was 13. My writing style has changed, but I thought I’d put it up anyway :D:D

What Are We? belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

Like our water we waste blood,
from the old and from the young,
filling kid’s minds with bad ideas,
giving them much more to fear.

Gangsters scar the streets at night,
looking for something to tag, or fight,
giving youth a bad name,
so now we’re all treated just the same.

Our planet is a ticking time bomb,
before you know it, it’ll be gone,
putting money before our pride,
and discriminate music is our guide.

It seems so hard to just have peace,
all because someone won’t have the wars ceased,
we’re driven by drugs and alcohol,
now tell me addict, where is your soul?

People are judged for their beliefs,
the whalers scour the sea as theives,
we’d let someone die because they can’t afford the cure,
now that is evil real and pure.

Are we good or are we bad?
are we happy or are we sad?
this question sometimes bothers me,
if we cause all this….what are we?

  • fotoflash

    fotoflash

    my lord!!! that is SO…SO good!!

  • PhotoFox replied

    Haha thank you fotoflash!!

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