Muse Potential
Let us never reach our potential, but let us try and try and try…
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Colour Me Vibrant Red!, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Melbourne & Victoria, Short stories - Spherical Scriptings, The Sensual Word and The Word TreeShe breathes across the threshold trailing a billow of sighing skirts which eddy the sunbeams in my eyes. She is a vivacious blur of scarlet from nape to toe, crowned by a shock of dark tresses that describe a myriad arcs of unbridled freedom in my mind.
She gestures a graceful limb, all encompassing, and jovial life illuminates her mien which radiates warmth in my cheeks. She is an oblivious twirl of crimson silk drafting a tender touch around the room that flutters sanguine promise in my heart.
She glissades along the hallway shedding a vermilion ribbons to reveal creamy curves of porcelain which reflect and embellish my brume desire. She is an extant sculpture of pliant poise and purpose that lures a cure in my quickening groin.
She recedes through the dim boudoir archway beckoning a coquettish exploit which dissipates the slumber in all my being. She is a tonic apparition of allusive silhouettes and shrouded contour that inhabits, only in my dreams.
She is my potential.
Charl045
Oh my goodness…how wonderfully romantic. Brett you are so expressive and this is an awesome piece of writing! A wonderful creative imagination.
Eric Greiff
“shedding a vermilion ribbons” pure genious Bret. I love the color of your poem.
StacyLee
Wow this is so brilliant! I thoroughly enjoyed this and will be back to read it again!
Paul Louis Vil...
Brett, this is a stunning body of work!
Well done mate! :D
Lisa Jewell
Wow Baf, a breathtaking vision “She recedes through the dim boudoir archway beckoning a coquettish exploit which dissipates the slumber in all my being. She is a tonic apparition of allusive silhouettes and shrouded contour that inhabits, only in my dreams.”
Now this is dreaming…...
Mark German
You have managed to capture some of the most beautiful things that effect me and put them down in one place. Bravo, Brett.
loramae
I am in love…....with your writing! :O) Spectacular and soooooo moving!
Laurie McClave
The reds are my favorite and you write so beautifully visual about them. Thank you!
Trish Cooper
Love, Love, Love this Brett!!!!!!!!!! absolutely breathtaking work!!!! ins fav!!!
MissKristy
Ditto to Loramae…this gets right in there and has my heart pounding pleasantly..just love it.
Jboo09
This is beautifully written and I love it, and gosh you use a lot of big words lol!! I’m going to go find my dictionary now…
KDMusique
I really liked this. How unique!
Suzanne German
brett…...gee wow…..wonderful wonderful stuff!
Erin Lyall
This is so beautiful.. I’m trying to find the right words for it but I can’t, you’ve already done that yourself.
Verangel
This is beautiful… takes the reader on a journey into the world of rich, eloquent expressions and very special ambience… after which there is only silence… Thank you 8)))
Eric Greiff
RED such a beautiful color isn’t it Brett? Love this poem very INSPIRING!
lolowe
The way you described this is extraordinary. It was poetic, fluid, beautiful, I loved it.
Nith
Red is wonderful color
VelvetGirl
This is agonisingly beautiful….
ufosIsee
Well written, nice flow and wonderfully placed.
Laurie Sherman
Wonderful, evocative, inspiring…wow!