Fall Down on me like Rain
Fall Down on me like Rain belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry ! and All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalWould you like to feel the rain
drift down upon your broken heart?
Would a rainbow dry the tears
of your broken lovers art?
Would you like to feel a tender touch
on your throat gone sore from crying?
Would a whisper sooth the memories
that make you feel like dying?
Then touch my hand and lean on me.
Fall down on me like rain.
You’ll never be whole in loneliness.
So fall, fall down on me like rain.
Would you like to feel a summer sigh
blow cool across your breast?
Would the sound of angels call you back
to where your soul can rest?
Would you like to feel the sunshine
where before the clouds held sway?
Would awaking to my laughter
place new perspective in your day?
Then touch my hand and lean on me.
Fall down on me like rain.
You’ll never be free in helplessness.
So fall, fall down on me like rain.
Would you like to feel it gone away
as though it never mattered?
Would it help if I imbibed your thoughts
and to the four winds scattered?
Would you like to feel that I am here
to catch your tears with mine?
Would I see your smile if I told you
that you fall on me divine?
Then touch my hand and lean on me.
Fall down on me like rain.
I’ll love you more with every drop.
So fall. Fall down on me like rain.
Dan Cahill
Beautiful words. So well done
Trish Cooper
Absolutely gorgeous!!!!!!!! God, its good to see you back…i have missed your wonderful work!!! inst fav!!!!!!!!!! Trishaxoxo
Suzanne German
Oh Brett!!!! – This is – sparkling – powerful – deep – evocative – intense, yet gentle. Oh wow…..what a beautiful piece of work! Absolutely soulful…touched me very very deeply….
suzanne
Suzanne German
i hope you posted it to the poetry & prose – questions & meaning group btw… -sg
Suzanne German
ok…i read this again…and i can’t see through the tears…brett – you’ve made me cry!...this is beautiful!
Mark German
Great ballad :)
Lisa Jewell
What a wonderful way to start the day…there is such tenderness here, such depth of care, and love….
The sun is shinning in bright brilliance, I almost wish the rain was back….
XOX
Robert Elliott
So deep with so much meaning, absolutely wonderful !!!!!
gothgirl
wonderful writing
hennie
truly wonderfully written
PhotogeniquE IPA
a really wonderful poem – tremendous writing!
Jeff Burns
Beautiful words! Stunning writing
InfinityRain
Very powerfully written…I’m truly at a loss for words.wow
hugs
blueravenice
Very inspiring….......Thanx
Symmetry44
Excellent piece!
shaytay
Moving…..powerful….leaves me speechless!:)
Thomas Williams
I heard music reading this.
anaisnais
Awesome, a very touching and comforting piece. It’s good to know therre are people ut there who truly care about others. You write well, can’t wait to read you more!
Paul (Quixote)...
Well written indeed.
rsteve254
Conventional rhythm but necessary to provide a strong backdrop for the great choice of words – poignant and beautiful.
IdKid
This beautifully lyrical and rythmic. Lovely use of simple and effective words.
loramae
What an effect on my heart….some of the most genuine and truest sentiments I have ever had the joy to read….How many a soul would melt at the feet of one so real and so true…I am touched.
Robert Knapman
This real and senstive writing has entered this house and lingered. Stunning work. Thankyou.
lilgem4u
I fell in love with this and have read it over and over. It really touches the heart.
Kimberley Gifford
Wow – if anyone ever wrote this for me….it would seriously bind me to them for life : )
plyle
Well it seems Brett that everyone has decided upon its brilliance already, but I will say that your flow is quite lovely!
Keep it up!
Pat
stephfine
very well said like your poem!
Taine
This is great writing BAF, very uplifting & inspiring; makes me wanna go & sing to the one I love….
Andrea Bailey
This is the heart ,what insight how majestic your mind so beautiful
eagerlyawaiting
the softness of the beauty if very tangible..
thank you..
DevaDaDiva
omg that was the best. love it. ur a great writer! thaat was beautiful =]
VelvetGirl
Soft et beau! Too beautiful for words.
oneperfectkiss
And still my fav of yours dear friend….so beautiful Brett!! xx
blueravenice
This has to be my all time Favorite on Bubble still absolutely a beautiful words.
Jonathan Sloat
Wow!!! absolutely beautiful! IF I could write like that. . . well! Love it!