Her hair tied back in ribbons of time
and rainbows glistening rain.
So now I see her pretty face
without the squint of pain.
Her shoulders bare in a strapless dress
so pure and formed for kissing.
No longer awkwardly tensed or flinched
those demons have gone missing.
Around her waist and cinched on hips
a belt of whitest gold.
So now I see the way they sway
A new freedom makes her bold.
Upon her feet are diamond slippers
each with a single pearl.
No longer cautious, happily skipping
I’m loving this re-made world.
Remade World
A simple one, but sweet.
Kristy Lee, 3 months ago
Yes yes yes…it is a new day, it is a new world.
Love this, Baf. So warm and joyous.
Makes me want to skip and dance the day away.
noinvisiblehand, 3 months ago
I’m in a momentous struggle! Simple or complex writing, Or a mixture. Anyway, I like this!
LisaG, 3 months ago
I vote re-made…very sweet…
Nice to see you about Baf….XO
Verangel, 3 months ago
I like this piece, especially the way it flows. Love the vividness.
It evokes feelings of relief, comfort and joy. Well written 8)))