Girl At The Edge Of The World

Girl At The Edge Of The World by pauldrobertson

Girl At The Edge Of The World

Watercolours, only 20cm or so. just finished it…
here’s a song i wrote…

I think maybe I took too much
Of that pretty, pretty powdery stuff
We knock over the washing up
Now we’re barefoot on broken cups…
She pulls at my clothes and I take her pulse.
And my kitchen is covered in dust…

She makes me tea
She makes me tea
She
... She makes me tea.
But we – never touch…
We never touch.

She lay with me on the living, dying grass
Nothing endless, nothing vast
Frightened so scared
And pressed against the glass…

She gets ice cream
On her purple dress
And then…just when…
I’m watching her get dressed
She says that patience
Is the saddest kind of shyness.

It’s all that we have given
It is the shape

Of our ruin

But this isn’t a fever or a dream…
She’s wiping her hands onto her jeans
I ask her to stay, I BEG her to STAY
And that’s when she really starts to laugh

Blown out like a light bulb a candle a mind…
We are…
So thin;
Our skin…
Is paper-light.
And she smiles…

We fuck in a kind of trance
She calls it
Our

Bone… Dance

She makes me tea
She makes me tea
She makes me tea
But we never touch

We… never touch

Girl At The Edge Of The World belongs to the following groups:

1 on 1: The Fine Art of Portraiture, All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical., Live, Love, Dream, Lyrical Visions, Practising the Dark Arts, Safe Haven, Spiritual Art, The Sensual Word, WA Red Bubbles, Watercolour Paintings and Writers' Market
  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor, about 1 month ago

    This is fantastic. Very moving. Her features say so much. You got what you wanted from this ..Congrats.

  • pauldrobertson

    pauldrobertson in reply to Judi Taylor’s comment, about 1 month ago

    thanks! been off running round for a while… good to be back`

  • Cathie Tranent

    Cathie TranentAdelaide Meatspace Coordinator, about 1 month ago

    Her eyes are amazing Paul … welcome back!!

  • Scott Ruhs

    Scott Ruhs, about 1 month ago

    Love the catch light in the eyes.

  • karolina

    karolina, about 1 month ago

    oooh so very lovely

  • annacuypers

    annacuypers, about 1 month ago

    This is so beautiful ! Strong artwork.

  • Peter Zentjens

    Peter Zentjens, about 1 month ago

    Very dark, mood and painting, the light face really draws the eye to her sadness. Very strong artwork indeed.

  • Nico3

    Nico3, about 1 month ago

    She looks so fragile. Very beautiful.

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl, about 1 month ago

    Totally elegant and very hot! Love the song lyrics too!!!

  • Marion Chapman

    Marion Chapman, about 1 month ago

    such incredible sadness in your song – it’s wonderful

  • Keeli

    Keeli, about 1 month ago

    Fantastic! Great writing, awesome visual!

  • Jessica Tremp

    Jessica Tremp, about 1 month ago

    beautiful Paul, love her eyes

  • Susie Mac

    Susie Mac, about 1 month ago

    This is beautiful Paul…. she is beautiful… weve missed ya!! welcome back… susie :)

  • Carolyn Bishop

    Carolyn Bishop, about 1 month ago

    Simply beautiful!

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, about 1 month ago

    hte painting is very curious…..the words – especially about never touching .......yes well, touching is more than tangible, that of the lasting kind at least.
    I like the ‘diggernt’ look on her face….she seems, yeah, different in a very interesting way.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, about 1 month ago

    correction – different (not ‘diggernt’ – bad touch-typing) ....oops!

  • Theresa Rankin

    Theresa Rankin, about 1 month ago

    Simple elegance!

  • ladyb

    ladyb, about 1 month ago

    Beautiful.

  • pauldrobertson

    pauldrobertson, about 1 month ago

    thank you all so much, was not sure about this one.

  • ENaLu

    ENaLu, about 1 month ago

    really love your writing here
    this song!! would love to hear it
    :)

  • hatefueled

    hatefueled, 11 days ago

    hey a new one! wow! i love it! her face looks so innocent and smooth! makes you want to wrap your arms around her and protect her from all that darkness around her.

  • Melissa Vowell

    Melissa Vowell, 3 days ago

    Argh, Totaly totaly beautiful Paul. Captivating.

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