Girl At The Edge Of The World
Watercolours, only 20cm or so. just finished it…
here’s a song i wrote…
I think maybe I took too much
Of that pretty, pretty powdery stuff
We knock over the washing up
Now we’re barefoot on broken cups…
She pulls at my clothes and I take her pulse.
And my kitchen is covered in dust…
She makes me tea
She makes me tea
She
... She makes me tea.
But we – never touch…
We never touch.
She lay with me on the living, dying grass
Nothing endless, nothing vast
Frightened so scared
And pressed against the glass…
She gets ice cream
On her purple dress
And then…just when…
I’m watching her get dressed
She says that patience
Is the saddest kind of shyness.
It’s all that we have given
It is the shape
Of our ruin
But this isn’t a fever or a dream…
She’s wiping her hands onto her jeans
I ask her to stay, I BEG her to STAY
And that’s when she really starts to laugh
Blown out like a light bulb a candle a mind…
We are…
So thin;
Our skin…
Is paper-light.
And she smiles…
We fuck in a kind of trance
She calls it
Our
Bone… Dance
She makes me tea
She makes me tea
She makes me tea
But we never touch
We… never touch
Girl At The Edge Of The World belongs to the following groups:
1 on 1: The Fine Art of Portraiture, All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical., Live, Love, Dream, Lyrical Visions, Practising the Dark Arts, Safe Haven, Spiritual Art, The Sensual Word, WA Red Bubbles, Watercolour Paintings and Writers' MarketAvailable for sale as Cards, Matted Prints, Laminated Prints, Mounted Prints, Canvas Prints, Framed Prints and Posters

Judi Taylor, about 1 month ago
This is fantastic. Very moving. Her features say so much. You got what you wanted from this ..Congrats.
pauldrobertson in reply to Judi Taylor’s comment, about 1 month ago
thanks! been off running round for a while… good to be back`
Cathie Tranent
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about 1 month ago
Her eyes are amazing Paul … welcome back!!
Scott Ruhs, about 1 month ago
Love the catch light in the eyes.
karolina, about 1 month ago
oooh so very lovely
annacuypers, about 1 month ago
This is so beautiful ! Strong artwork.
Peter Zentjens, about 1 month ago
Very dark, mood and painting, the light face really draws the eye to her sadness. Very strong artwork indeed.
Nico3, about 1 month ago
She looks so fragile. Very beautiful.
deliriousgirl, about 1 month ago
Totally elegant and very hot! Love the song lyrics too!!!
Marion Chapman, about 1 month ago
such incredible sadness in your song – it’s wonderful
Keeli, about 1 month ago
Fantastic! Great writing, awesome visual!
Jessica Tremp, about 1 month ago
beautiful Paul, love her eyes
Susie Mac, about 1 month ago
This is beautiful Paul…. she is beautiful… weve missed ya!! welcome back… susie :)
Carolyn Bishop, about 1 month ago
Simply beautiful!
Suzanne German, about 1 month ago
hte painting is very curious…..the words – especially about never touching .......yes well, touching is more than tangible, that of the lasting kind at least.
I like the ‘diggernt’ look on her face….she seems, yeah, different in a very interesting way.
Suzanne German, about 1 month ago
correction – different (not ‘diggernt’ – bad touch-typing) ....oops!
Theresa Rankin, about 1 month ago
Simple elegance!
ladyb, about 1 month ago
Beautiful.
pauldrobertson, about 1 month ago
thank you all so much, was not sure about this one.
ENaLu, about 1 month ago
really love your writing here
this song!! would love to hear it
:)
hatefueled, 11 days ago
hey a new one! wow! i love it! her face looks so innocent and smooth! makes you want to wrap your arms around her and protect her from all that darkness around her.
Melissa Vowell, 3 days ago
Argh, Totaly totaly beautiful Paul. Captivating.