One night the boy became a fox

Paul Compton
Author: Paul Compton
Word Count: 121
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One night the boy became a fox

A personal one.
Please read slowly.

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One night the boy became a fox belongs to the following groups:

Melbourne & Victoria and The Word Tree

One night the boy became a fox.

He sighed off his skin in the moonlight
Let all time fall away from him
Shook off a moniker.
In its place a miraculous pelt
- And the sharpest teeth yet.

It was the love song that beckoned him outside
In the small hours,
To breathe the frozen air
And feel the dirt under bare feet.
Something once dormant is awakened
An unabashed want to run
To howl
To tear through old flesh
...
To both invoke a tempest and brave the fall out.

Once, the night used to breed empty promises for a boy with a name
Once only fear and shame
But the divide is no more,

Now the nameless one owns the night.

  • Shannon Donovan

    Shannon Donovan

    This is phenomenal Paul!! Straight to faves!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Oh my, thank you so much Shannon. I’m so glad you appreciate this. Thank you very very much.

  • Jen Cannella

    Jen Cannella

    Love this!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you!! : )

  • pinkyjain

    pinkyjain

    Beautiful Paul. Such a lovely poem of spirit and freedom. my dreams for years has to been to shed my human skin and become free as an Animal in the jungles. So wonderful his dream is fulfilled

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you pinkyjain. When I was young the night terrified me. Now it is my home. I am free and loved thanks to kind and wonderful people like you : ) xo

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    ooo wow!!! Paul this piece of writing in phenomenal! congratulations, beautifully written.. :)

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much Karin. That means a lot to me. I was nervous about putting up a poem but I felt this one needed to be seen. Thank you for your support and kindness : )

  • butchart

    butchart

    oh Paul…. a metamorphosis….. i’m in awe of your eloquence and proud of your courage… i can’t wait to see and feel the results…............... much love….......b

  • Paul Compton replied

    Me too. Thank you deeply Butch. Things that once hindered me are breaking away – they were only obstacles in my mind. The night is ours Butch. xo

  • darkestartist

    darkestartist

    beautifully done…the night is a great place to live. if maurice sendak and leonard cohen could mate, it would make this poem. wonderful imagery.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Now THAT’S a compliment!! Lol! I can’t describe how happy you’ve made me feel. Thank you. Thank you thank you : D

  • metronomad

    metronomad

    you have woven a beautiful imagery with words.

  • Paul Compton replied

    That was a very thoughtful comment to write, thank you so very much.

  • butchart

    butchart

    then let the night begin…............ love you my friend….............b

  • pinkyjain

    pinkyjain

    Here is a song i have loved forever, about the night, SelfControl

  • Paul Compton replied

    That song is amazing! I’d never heard it before – such evocative lyrics. The video is pretty edgy too. I am now going to look further into the Laura Branigan back catalogue. Thanks a heap pinkyjain. Have a wonderful day/night : D

  • Mui-Ling Teh

    Mui-Ling Teh

    Lovely read Paul. I was waiting for my 200MB Photoshop file to save, and typically that means a couple minutes of boredom and impatience, but using that time to read this lifts my imagination. After reaching that point in life where I spend most of my time on work I desire these kind of moments of wildness and freedom.

  • Paul Compton replied

    We all do Mui-Ling. Thank you for reading this. I hope all is well with you : )

  • GLAMAZON

    GLAMAZON

    Wonderful wonderful stuff. Impressive viseral poetic nature to this unique piece. Love it.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much for appreciating this : )

  • Darko4ever

    Darko4ever

    “Now the nameless one owns the night.”

    I’m in love, If I only had the words to describe the impact this piece has had but I lack the skills. All I can say is Thank you.

  • Paul Compton replied

    That comment means the world to me. I’m so glad this made you feel. I would like to say thank you : )

  • Jessica  Tremp

    Jessica Tremp

    so lovely to see your words…i love ‘He sighed off his skin in the moonlight ‘

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much Jessica. You taking the time to read and comment means a great deal to me. Thank you. Best wishes : )

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman

    Own that night ! ‘And feel the dirt under bare feet”. Yes!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Yes! It’s mine – it’s ours. Thank you for reading this : )

  • John Douglas

    John Douglas

    and I can see a wonderful series of visuals to go with this :)

  • Paul Compton replied

    The first work will be called Fox Divine ; ) Thank you for reading John.

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    I like the way you possess the night….

    A visual piece of writing….wonderfully written . :)

  • Paul Compton replied

    Ah, the night is yours too Lisa. Thank you so much for reading this and commenting. I’ll have a smile on my face for the rest of the day : )

  • purelydecorative

    purelydecorative

    Wonderful Paul! So evocative… I could feel myself floating in the night above, watching him howl!

  • John Douglas

    John Douglas

    can’t wait to see it paul! xx

  • Toby Austin Gooley

    Toby Austin Go...

    There are a bunch of Japanese folktales about foxes turning into people and playing tricks and illusions on humans. This kinda reminds me of them. Rock on, Kitsune-boy

  • Paul Compton replied

    Yes! Yes! I love these amazing tales. The fox is a trickster in many cultures and a often considered a supernatural being that mediates between worlds. Thank you for reading tobytoby : )

  • invisible

    invisible

    I’m the one also in ECSTASY here …..OH , Paul ! ....xx Andre

  • Paul Compton replied

    I’m so glad you feel this Andre. Thank you. xo

  • bellmusker

    bellmusker

    What a beautiful and intriguing piece of writing, Paul. I particularly loved this: Shook off a moniker / In its place a miraculous pelt
    You had my interest from the first line.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment bellmusker. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes to you : )

  • Steve Strodder a.k.a Saul and Cal.S.Heart

    Steve Strodder...

    This. Is. Amazing

    i can see how it is personal because i relate 100%

    something just changes one day when you walk out into the night.

    just clicks, and all of a sudden you love it and are more comfortable with it then you thought possible

  • Paul Compton replied

    Yes! Thank you so much Steve. I’m so glad you identify with this; makes me feel like I’m not alone. The night is ours. Thank you.

  • Yasemin Sumner

    Yasemin Sumner

    This made my heart swell up into a shape I haven’t seen before. I think becasue I was always scared of the dark too. Much easier to see in the moonlight now though…and I can see you do too. This piece is just sublime, Paul and resonates deeply for me. x

  • Paul Compton replied

    I’m so glad this spoke to you Yasemin. Yes, moonlight is enough to light the way. Your comment means the world to me. Thank you so very much. x

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    beautiful Paul .. you write as extraordinarly wonderful as you draw xx

  • Paul Compton replied

    Oh, you’re too sweet Nicole. Thank you immensely : ) xo

  • Firedrake

    Firedrake

    Wonderful – I love the second line :)

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much Firedrake : )

  • transmute

    transmute

    Owning the night indeed. Make the rabbits hide :)

  • Paul Compton replied

    Hee hee, indeed. Thank you so glad for commenting Chris : )

  • S Burns

    S Burns

    You have a very cool style. I enjoyed is a lot.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you. I’m so glad you enjoyed this. Best wishes to you Stanley.

  • lianne

    lianne

    A truly magical piece yourself, Paul – brave and enspirited, to metamorphose into what it is we must become and then to own it – brilliant metaphor. And a very gifted and imaginative style! I’m as impressed with your abilities as a writer as I am with your talent as an artist. Lovely work!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Lianne, you are too sweet. Thank you so much for that wonderful and thoughtful comment. I appreciate the support more than you’ll ever know. Thank you : )

  • greeneyes

    greeneyes

    I know that feeling, of the calling at night – like someone elses blood is running in your veins – you have started a hunt(a yearning) in these words – pray tell, what is the prey?
    have you ever looked up what foxes symbolize – it is rather interesting
    I used to pass them late at night when I was walking home aroung Hampstead Heath We would cross paths, as they prowled from the moon light into shaded veils of buildings and trees

  • Paul Compton replied

    Yes I have. Foxes are generally considered tricksters and have the power to “travel between worlds”, this probably comes from the fact that they are resourceful and can live anywhere. They are majestic creatures to me. I often take walks around midnight and see them playing carelessly with each other on the streets when no-one is around. When you see a wild animal and it looks straight at you…that is one of my favourite things in the world. Thank you for commenting greeneyes. Best wishes to you : )

  • greeneyes

    greeneyes

    yes i too know the held gaze of a fox ….I will keep watching you, i will add you to my favourites
    – keep followiing foxes

  • Luke Downes

    Luke Downes

    It seems to have been written by a fox: sly, slippery, secretive, seductive even. Bravo, Paul, glad to see you’re still here!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Hee hee, I believe the fox to be resourceful and shy also ; )
    So glad to have you back Luke.

  • Veronica Fisher

    Veronica Fisher

    ive always wished i could write like that. :) Your lovely pauly

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much Vonny. Miss you terribly x

  • Holly Ringland

    Holly Ringland

    oh geez paul, i absolutely loved this and as advised, read it ever so slowly. i really really love that in metamorphsis the nameless finally felt the dirt under foot, heard the love song, sighed in the moonlight. something about meek inheriting it all comes to mind :) beauitiful work.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Wow, thank you so much for the lovely comment Holly. I’m so glad you like and understand this. Yes, the meek shall inherit the earth or perhaps the vulpine ; )
    Thank you.

  • CloudChaser

    CloudChaser

    I so understand this, better than you will ever know… peace and happiness to you!!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Understood : )
    Thank you so much for the kind words and I wish you every joy also CloudChaser.

  • Sheamus D

    Sheamus D

    This is a striking piece Paul, instinctive and written with a finespun elegance.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Oh, you are too sweet Sheamus! That’s one mighty lovely comment, thank you immensely.

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    I shall have to show this poem to a “furry” friend of mine who actually IS a fox. Or so he told me.

    This is so inspiring, I wonder how I hadn’t discovered your writing before, but now I have it makes me really happy!!

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much, I’m glad you like this. Your comment really makes me smile. Say hello to your friend for me, we foxes all know each other ; )

  • Damian

    Damian

    This is lovely Paul, really enjoyed it. And I had visuals in the style of “Where the Wild Things Are”, LOL :)

  • Paul Compton replied

    Oh, thanks so much Damian. Glad you liked it and I’m honoured by this comment because Where The Wild Things Are is one of my all time favourite books. Hope all is wonderful in your world : )

  • bearpaw

    bearpaw

    i read this 3 times and was in awe each time i read it… it’s like majick being woven…. just amazing Paul…

  • Paul Compton replied

    Wow, thank you so much for that beautiful comment bearpaw; you’ve made my day. Thank you and I’m glad you enjoyed this : )

  • John Fish

    John Fish

    this is great. love the writing. goes perfectly with your fox drawing

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Excellent writing, beautifully expresssed.

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so very much : )

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    Holy cow, this is sheer, unadulterated, mystical and beautiful brilliance. like a dream unfolding before me. amazing. wow! love, Kristin

  • Paul Compton replied

    Oh my gosh what a lovely comment. Thank you so very much! I’m so glad you got so much from this. Best wishes to you : )

  • Reynaldo

    Reynaldo

    cool work paul

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you Reynaldo : )

  • Ash Sievwright

    Ash Sievwright

    if i could be any other animal I think it would be a fox … especially this one with his miraculous pelt. Lovely. Ax

  • Paul Compton replied

    Thank you so much fellow fox ; )
    Best wishes to you Ash : )

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    Now the nameless one owns the night.

    luminous ethereal words. your writing is exquisite

  • micklyn

    micklyn

    stunning writing, Paul. Wow.

  • msdebbie

    msdebbie

    Hi Paul, I’ve referenced this piece here (in a description accompanying a fable of female-feline transformation). I really adore the metaphors in your tale of a boy becoming a fox, especially To both invoke a tempest and brave the fall out Great writing xoxo

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