Wisdom of HER Ages
Have you ever wondered how you knew something so definitely without any real experience or knowledge of how you acquired the information? This is a short story of a young girl who finds her story inside a stone and the information about her life that it revealed to her while she sleeps. Is it possible that this stone is guiding her to her life’s purpose?
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All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Bits and Pieces , Core [C.O.R.E], Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Freedom to Shine, Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day ), Short stories - Spherical Scriptings, Sisters in Arms (feminine relationship described), Spirit of the Native American, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD and WMGPart I: The Journey
She picked up the stone and pressed it to her lips. With eyes closed she felt its coolness. Slowly she ran the stone along her lips on up over her cheek on each side of her face. Slowly, very slowly.
The smoothness of the stone made it look like a polished gem. But it was a river rock whose surface was smoothed by the water rushing over it.
I will call you “Swift”, she whispered.
Powdery pollen swirled in the breeze giving it a misty look. The late afternoon sun was dimmed by the denseness of the substance that was being carried on the wind.
She looked up at the sky not bothering to cover her eyes from the sun’s rays. A hawk flew high in the clouds, a clear sign to her that messages were being delivered. The stone in her hand moved … just a little giggle. It did not startle her but she wondered how it was that the solid object she was holding could move on its own. She did not give it a lot of thought however and held it more tightly in her hand as if telling Swift that he was not suppose to be able to change position.
Time passed quickly. It was nearly dark when she turned to leave the wooded area that followed the winding river. The call of a crow caused her to stop and turn around. There among the trees and brushes she stared into the bleakness of the night searching for the crow on the limbs of the trees. Again she heard him, “Caw … caw … caw” ... three times he called to her.
She stood still holding Swift loosely in her hand, so loose that she nearly dropped him. Five minutes then ten minutes passed. She could not remove her gaze from the trees in front of her that went deep into the forest.
A blink. What was that? She blinked again trying harder now to soften her focus. There was a sensation of lashes batting against the palm of her hand so very lightly.
“Swift! Is that you,” she cried? But there was only silence.
There was movement in the forest though, she knew it. She could sense it and amazingly she thought she could visualize it too. But that is not possible, she thought. Trees cannot move, they can only sway in the wind. They cannot wave their limbs except to bend them when the guardians of the wind commanded it.
Her hand was open now. Swift was speaking to her though there was no sound.
Take me with you when you sleep tonight. Hold me while you slumber. I am a recorder of history, your history, Earth history. I have acquired much knowledge over the centuries. I am very old and have been waiting for you for a long, long time. I have traveled many miles to reach you, rolling down hills, riding the current of the rivers and summoning the people who have carried me across the land. I rested here until you finally reached for me and now I am home.
Part II: The Dream …. to follow shortly
Shoaib .
yes ! so nice… excellent first part… i like where you are going with this and i cant wait to see where ya go next .. let me know when part 2 is ready !!!
shoaib
wigs
lovely, I too am looking forward to part two…. beautiful and captivating writing
John44
You impressed me again!
C J Lewis
Leaves us wanting to know more … excellent writing Judi … can’t wait for part II :)
kjgordon
can you see everyone is on the edge of their chairs…..............
TeriLee
gunna fall offa me chair if you don’t get part two soon enough…love this!!!
linaji
Ok.. you always keep us in SUSPENSE ..FARGEN PART 2 ALREADY!! EXCELLENT BABY!
linaji
SERIOUS GET GOING ON PART 2
oneperfectkiss
I really enjoyed reading this beautiful story and I look forward to the next instalment. Congrats too, dearest. xxxx
Songwriter
You have me hooked! Get me the dream quick, please!!! I love it. :0) Song
RosaCobos
The Stones have a soul..
I know it..
We have many here at home..
and all are precious..
and if they are too many… we keep the inot a box.
they are out bones and the promise of the earth that our lives can be rooted.
Rosa (precious writing Judi… your writing is fresh, candid and plenty of fruits… generous of fantasy and clearness…I like it very much)
JenLand
Ah, the stone people! You must know that I would LOVE this one! I cannot hike without picking up stones and rocks, sometimes taking them home if they give me permission, sometimes talking with them and leaving them where I found them, sometimes just washing them off a little so that they can sparkle again…........... wonderful beginning!!!! More, more!! i want more!!
ps – sorry I missed your call last night. :o) Working all weekend…......... soon, we’ll catch up soon. XO
hugh023
Great start to a promising story, looking forward to subsequent parts.