Don't Quit

When things go wrong, as they sometimes will,
When the road you’re trudging seems all uphill,
When funds are low and the debts are high,
And you want to smile but you have to sigh,
When care is pressing you down a bit,
Rest if you must, but don’t you quit.

Life is queer with its twists and turns,
As every one of us sometimes learns,
And many a failure turns about,
When he might have won if he’d stuck it out.
Don’t give up, though the pace seems slow -
You may succeed with another blow.

Often the goal is nearer than
It seems to a faint and faltering man;
Often the struggler has given up
When he might have captured the victor’s cup,
And he learned too late, when the night slipped down,
How close he was to the golden crown.

Success is failure turned inside out -
The silver tint of the clouds of doubt,
And you never can tell how close you are -
It may be near when it seems afar;
So stick to the fight when you’re hardest hit -
It’s when things seem worst that you mustn’t quit.

  • David Petranker

    David Petranker

    Your absolutly right and well written

  • ozlat replied

    keep your chin up son

  • Stzar

    Stzar

    Your work is wonderful !! so inspirational and well written

    one of my favourite songs “Don’t Give Up” by Peter Gabriel moves me to tears
    and I just love Your Poem !! This could be beautiful lyrics to a song

  • ozlat replied

    then you’d probably love ‘roses from my friends’ by ben harper… another top song !!

  • jegustavsen

    jegustavsen

    I agree, this is beautiful and inspiring!

  • ozlat replied

    hope is a wonderful thing

  • Rowi

    Rowi

    great piece of writing very uplifting with a great message. Some times I think – it would be so easy to give up, but no got to keep going…

  • ozlat replied

    left left left right left “)

  • Stzar

    Stzar

    I love your poetry !!

    i only gave peter gabriel’s song as a reference to what i was trying to say ‘
    I love your poem

    god i love Ben Harper ... the song you quote to me: Live Ben Harper – Roses From My Friends

    forgive me for holding you close

    this may be the last time i see you
    and if you keep me in your heart, together we shall be eternal..

    Believe

  • Stzar

    Stzar

    these are my sentiments:

    don’t give up -because you have friends

    especially expressed by peter gabriel
    don’t give up
    you’re not the only one
    you still have us

  • Stzar

    Stzar

    and this is how i first heard it in 1994 when i was totally and completely ready to give up

    don’t quit

    and i was inspired and learned I want to LIVE !!

  • Stzar

    Stzar

    darling ~

    “i do not just read your poem silently
    I speak the words of your poem and read them out loud

    thereby the sound of my voice enters my ears
    and i hear your words so loud and eloquently clear

    while what i hear is in my very own voice,
    i say your words and to me your words become voice

    there’s a music symphony resonating your words
    most beautiful for all who have not and have heard”

  • ozlat replied

    your responses are poetic in themselves and it’s always a joy having to open up RB and read the your inspiring response.. and thanks for the youtube vid links… i’m really digging the peter gabriel song !!

  • LOUIS  VAN DEN HEEVER

    LOUIS VAN DEN...

    great words!keep rollin’

  • ozlat replied

    rollin and a tumblin canned heat style brutha

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