Little bubbles...

ozjami
Author: ozjami
Word Count: 35
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Little bubbles...

Just an observation of being down by the water!!

Sitting by the river,
Watching the fish swimming by,
Blurs of colours bend and contour,
Air bubbles ripple,
Dipping Ducks,
An occasional swan,
Lillypads litter like floating islands,
While sparrows n finches flap on by….

  • susan davies

    susan davies

    love this one mate, lovely image in my mind

  • Kym  Breeze

    Kym Breeze

    lovely, creates a great visual image, well written, cheers

  • ozjami

    ozjami

    TY sue and Kym!

  • Dale Wilhelm

    Dale Wilhelm

    Wonderful feel, very vivid and descript.. Sounds like a place to kick back and relax. Excellent job Ozjami!

  • ozjami

    ozjami

    TY mate!

  • pinkyjain

    pinkyjain

    Very beautiful James, brings up visions of a creek i live nearby, with Ducks & Egrets & the littler Birds

  •  Cheri Perry

    Cheri Perry

    Very well written…Nice work

  • genaronise

    genaronise

    I close my eyes and I can almost see what you’re writing. Thanks for the smile.

  • Trish Cooper

    Trish Cooper

    nice James….sounds like you did a whole lot more than just observe…you became…Trish

  • javaqueen2000

    javaqueen2000

    I love this imagery!

  • ozjami

    ozjami

    thanks guys!!

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fish, lillypads, pond and water