Rejected

Justin Jones
Author: Justin Jones
Word Count: 60
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He wonders why today, how it all fell apart?
Kick me while I’m down. I’m wearing this sad old frown.
Stop fading from my life, because I need you tonight.
Where’s the bottle? I need to escape this pain.
Where’s the bottle? Where’s the rain?
Wash me away in the hard stuff.
Wash me away…

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  • dogpriest

    dogpriest, 2 months ago

    shit man, very well written, awesome piece!!
    first you drink the bottle, then the bottle drinks you.
    well done dog.

    dogpriest

  • Justin Jones

    Justin Jones in reply to dogpriest’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thank you, Dogpriest.
    I love writing, and it’s great to receive positive feedback!
    Very appreciated.

  • dogpriest

    dogpriest, 2 months ago

    well keep writting, cause thats some good stuff you have to share ; )

    dogpriest

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sad, pain and rejection