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A Starfish Of The Precious Kind

My bare feet touched the moisten cool sand of the beautiful seashore,
And my nostrils inhaled the ocean’s odor that calmed my heart’s core.
A smile greeted my pale face that had lost the color of the sun’s rays,
As my troubled emotions floated above my brain with the wave’s display.

I was alone in my inner world wondering if there was someone else for me,
There were no other human bodies wandering about as far as I could see.
My half naked body was at peace for the time being as my eyes gazed afar,
Something sparkled beneath the salty water as my feet touched a fish star.

With both hands I picked up the starfish that was big and appeared so alone,
So I made friends with the ocean creature as we both spoke as if on the phone.
I said, “Hello there beautiful lady, my name is Oscar and who may you be?”
My mind could hear the voice of the wind inside the starfish as I set if free.

Wavering in the powerful tide it soon made its way down to the ocean’s floor,
I entered the water as I walked in deeper hoping to find a secret door.
The mighty currents pulled me down until I couldn’t breathe as I passed out,
I soon was talking in visions as I died for while until I heard a big shout.

I saw a starfish with wings floating over me and telling me to please return,
Suddenly I awoke as I laid on the hot sand on the beach as my skin burned.
A dead dry starfish was next to my face as I had a hard time trying to stand,
So I cried on my way home as I carried the sea creature on my caring hands.

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Comments

  • EvaAn68
    EvaAn68about 3 years ago

    Oh my word how utterly beautiful Oscar… can feel that wet sand with my toes and the smell of the ocean… then there is all these other layers to it… you really do paint with your wonderful words… never, ever stop Oscar : )))))))

  • I’m so glad I can make the pictures and paint them with my words, by it is you the reader that can make them come to life by reading it, sensing them, feeling them, closing your eyes and seeing it, thus when you pour so much of yourself into them, they come alive and because of the beauty in your eyes to see all that my heart has to offer. Bless you always and thank you so much for always coming back for more, it makes my world go round and round, miss you too.

    – oscarelizondo

  • CanyonWind
  • Thank you so much for this wonderful feeling of being features, bless you.

    – oscarelizondo

  • Thank you again for the wonderful smiling feature.

    – oscarelizondo

  • Ginny York
    Ginny Yorkabout 3 years ago

    This is so sad and so beautiful all rolled into one again. You have a wonderful way of doing that Oscar. Beautifully written.

  • It only becomes beautiful when beauty eyes can see my words and works and thus it is in your heart where you can see what my hearts is painting. I am bless to have you follow my work because without someone to return to read my work, my work is nothing. I appreciate that you are so honest and can see what is deep in my heart and yearns to rise to the top where it can be viewed and appreciated, Thank you so much for the times you make me smile with the words that make my writing come to life.

    – oscarelizondo

  • EvaAn68
    EvaAn68about 3 years ago

    Can’t help but come back when you write so beautifully Oscar…… always know I’m in for such a wonderful treat everytime I do : ))))

  • I hope it continues, bless you and thank you so much.

    – oscarelizondo

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