A Loving Command of Our Trust

I just cannot wait another year
to hear the sound of your calming voice,
And since you are not able to be here next to me
it leaves me without a choice.

For twelve long months that you have stayed away
from my arms it feels very wrong,
Because this love of mine that wants you here
is crying for you in a sad song.

Another thirty days makes it another month
that I cannot see your beautiful smile,
It saddens me to be alone without your tender love
as I wait another long while.

Four and a half weeks added together
makes thirty one days to be so much alone,
Inside my rib cage my heart aches in pain
as it slowly turns to hardened stone.

In seven more days it will complete another week
if I don’t get to see your adorable face,
My heart beats faster as I dread not hugging you
very soon and it feels like it’s a never ending race.

Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday,
Friday, Saturday and even on Sunday,
This heart bleeds internally blue and red
from the misery of you being so far away.

Every day has twenty four long hours
that I spent neglecting the taste of your hungry lips,
Wish that I could spend each hour with you
under a full moon to put my hands on your hips.

In the sixty minutes that it takes to turn into another hour
my mind is never at peace without the touch of a kiss,
I want so much to taste your lipstick of cherry
as I lick if off and eat it to never have you to again miss.

The sixty seconds that keeps ticking in a minute
I pretend that you are so close to my body to feel,
And the feeling of your bare skin is aromatic of vanilla
As my sense of smell is loving you from head to your foot’s heal.

Oh, please meet me again for the first time
even though I have never seen a day without your lust,
A meeting of our minds will burst into an explosion
because it will become a love of experience that will command our full trust.

Copyright © Oscarelizondo poem born on date Wednesday September 01, 2010 4:45 PM

A Loving Command of Our Trust


Harlingen, United States

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