BI POLAR
Bi Polar belongs in my 2009 antholgy, SANDCASTLES
BI POLAR belongs to the following groups:
Live, Love, Dream: , Up & Coming Writers and WMGCelluloid stretching
against the
sugared child light
that smiles inside
me
island time
nursery rhyme
onion soup is good with thyme
Seventy score receding
pooling honey glints
inside me
depression low
sharp edged jaw
mastication sticks matter in my craw
Dissolved in this morass
swept up and away
blinding sulphur flash
ozoned out
summer high
lady bird, four-spot, fly
colours emboldened by the glint in my eye
Time-matter-space
conundrum
placate me, please.
butchart
oh so familiar…...... and well penned…...... b
noinvisiblehand replied
Thank you!
aspectsoftmk
;)...feel this! great writing indeed ian…
noinvisiblehand replied
Thanks terri!
Kimberley Davitt
incredible writing
noinvisiblehand replied
Merci!
Jaybe
I can really get into this one Ian….I know people with bipolar and you caught the emotion perfectly. Well done….
noinvisiblehand replied
Tanks my friend! Show it to them, see where they agree and disagree. Bi – polar is such a general diagnosis!
bearpaw
awesome writing Ian…..
noinvisiblehand replied
Thanks you nice human bean!
H M Bascom
Superior in every way! My favorite line: onion soup is good with thyme
noinvisiblehand replied
Thanks Helen. It’s comments like this that keep me writing!
Tina Hogg
Oh yes, and this is why I wouldn’t want to lose it (the bi-p that is!) (I lose ‘it’ regularly!!) – the intensity, the colours, sounds, rhymes …. great stuff x
noinvisiblehand replied
Ah, but retrospectively, those high moments when you think you are pure genius can prove rather pedestrian!
Abeona
ha general diagnoses i agree! lol absolutly brill writing…i have not had time lately to comment on others work but when i seen this i had to its totally amazing…just every word represents somethin tht i know so well. great emotion! x
noinvisiblehand replied
Thanks. Much appreciated!
sandraellen
Ian…........wonder FULLL!
sandra :)
noinvisiblehand replied
Thank you. I’ll be checking out your bubble soon. Ian.
SamanthaO
Onion soup would be good (better) with thyme… thank you for the suggestion.
noinvisiblehand replied
And you ought to know, Sam, that it was your blog which gave me the line. Thank you so very much, you American South African!